   Dindella
2009-03-07 . chapter 5LOLz! ^-^ Halarious! I enjoyed it thoroughly! :) |
 Horatio'H'Caine
2005-07-30 . chapter 4update |
 shadi's lover
2005-06-16 . chapter 4 poor, poor shadi... |
 Hem Ntjr Seth
2005-06-15 . chapter 4Chaos... gotta love it... O.O |
Hem Ntjr Seth
2005-06-10 . chapter 3XD I wonder how Shadi will explain how you get a something the size of a small melon out of something the size of a grape... XD Update soon... |
 daily ruse
2005-06-10 . chapter 3*giggles insanely* poor shadi. I love shadi... *glomps* this rox, please keep going!! |
Aliosn
2005-04-04 . chapter 2 Was Ishezu and the doll...Doning It? By any Chance?! |
Hem Ntjr Seth
2005-03-11 . chapter 1LOL update soon |
Dark Beloved of Light
2005-03-05 . chapter 1 umm... well... before you continue i think you should have someone beta this for you. you're repeating alot of hte lines and to be honest... i have no idea what's going on. it seems like a coold idea but... im kinda lost. i don't mean to be rude or mean and i'll understand if you delete my comment. |
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