you have a way with words that drags the reader into someone elses senses.. into their feel of the the world.

or even a view to the moment you express.

like here. it's like a deity (god) narrating the thoughts of the dying warrior.

-as this is one of my favorite movies, it's nice to see such interesting takes of the men in legend. not only that, but you have given tristan more life, emotion. something his memory deserves.

thank you for writing.

Wow. Haven't reviewed in ages-this was just amazing. Damn. I love the imagery.

Poor Tristan, he didn't deserve to die. This story was really well written; it showed Tristan did have emotions and wasn't always fearless. Many authors portray him as far too stoney and emotionless to be real. I loved the ending (as much as it is possible to enjoy Tristan's death) it rounded the story off nicely. Well done and keep it up!

Read all four of your short stories, and absolutely loved them. The fact that they are; one, about my two favourites, and two, emotional but at exactly the right length in order to prevent blabla, makes them great to read. However, after reading these four, I hope you will try your hand at one with more chapters, because I believe it will be great as well. These short ones canvey a potential I think you should try out. Basically, I am just begging for another story, but flattery never hurt anyone, and you do deserve it. So I hope you will write again! With a slightly more happy ending (or seemingly so at first, because angst is good!) for these two lovebirds. All the best, C.