Totally awesome. I think she would write that to Leon if she was never able to see him again ^^ i liked this a lot.

*sniffles and wipes away a tear* aaw, that was sweet ;_;

HmZ...it seems like this could be Ashley...I've only played a little bit of the game and from what I've played, this seems to be quite accurate. Pretty cool for just a "wing it" kind of situation. Quite interesting with how she could possibly feel after everything...as for errors, UmZ...a few "were" that you had should've been "was"...and the "incidence" at the end should've been "incident"...other than that, I think everything else was good...^_^ Good job!

That was...really sweet. ^_^ Thank you so much for portraying Ashley like a real human being, complete with fears and emotions and layers. There were a few grammatical errors, but overall they weren't enough to detract from the fic. For someone who hasn't played the game, you did pretty good in placing yourself in Ashley's shoes. You ought to play RE4, if not the other REs--RE4 is the most accessible, and in my opinion the best of the series. ^_^ I hope you add more letters; I think her and Leon's relationship is quite a font of potential. This almost makes me wanna write an L/A fic of of my own...

I likey! ~_~! This was yummy!

Are you sure you've never played RE4 yet? Just kidding. Anyway, I thought this was very well done. There is some spelling and grammer errors, but don't let that bother you. You did a good job stepping into Ashley's shoes even though you haven't played the game. Keep it up!

Wow. You really did a great job with this. In my opinion, you succeeded in telling the story from Ashley's perspective in an original way. It's hard to believe you haven't played the game as I think you captured Ashley almost perfectly.

The only thing constructive I could offer is to check for spelling and grammar.

i liked ot though it could have been more true in feelings like her saying she loved him. but it was good i liked it it's really hard to find re 4 stories so good job (oh by the way i have a rurouni kenshin fic Old and New)maybe you could check it out and review ^_^

Bravo! You succeeded in a place that most writers fail! You managed to put a person who is put out of character so much for the sake of humor, back to a state of reasonable character. (Anyone has rights to cower down and scream if a chainsaw maniac rushes you IMHO) Good job on this one!

Ooh! I like it! Very sweet. I think you captured Ashley's personality perfectly. I hope that you write another chapter, possibly Leon's reaction to the letter, but hey, you're the author - not me!