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Reviews For: My Worth

Lucy McGonagle
2005-07-06
ch 1,
abuseI LOVE IT! Okay, so I was hopping she'd actually confront him about it, but aleast she knows!! Please, please continue. I LOVE IT! J/A FOREVER! Please update asap. !
Inuyashas only Miko
2005-03-23
ch 1,
abusePLZ TELL ME THAT'S NOT THE END... WELL IF IT"S NOT PLZ PLZ PLZ CONTINUE!

Singed,
Odd's Wife
PS: LET ME KNOW IF YOU HAVE ANYOUTHER STOYR"S!
fuzzi too lazy to sign in
2005-03-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseHey, great job! And I simply love your writing style, the words you choose hit you as you're reading. And you manipulated Aelita's emotions wonderfully, taking the tiniest things and turnign them into huge setbacks for her like the sensation of touch. I hope this isnt the last story you post for a while!
Amber Skye
2005-03-06
ch 1,
abuseYay!! You got it posted! ^_^

Awesome stuff, that was a crazy emotional rollercoaster right there. Ah, so awesomely depressing at the start, I loved how the threads of cloth faded into a line of digits and then nothing. Very cool. And then you got the whole romancy thing going where she heard him say he loves her and she got so happy and excited and then BAM, that one sentence, "He loves...something that isn't real..."

Kudos to you! That part right there had a great impact. Lots of deep thoughts and emotion overall. ~contented sigh~ Just what I needed to read.

Oh, I had a thought on it though, if you want to hear. All about her not being real, and only alive when she's in the real world, and not Lyoko. But something of her being has to be transferred between Lyoko and the real world, spirit, soul, mind, whatever you want to call it. Because if she didn't have that, she would never be able to go back and forth between the worlds the way she did...the same way Ulrich and Odd and Yumi do. Take heart, Aelita!! Whoa, what's wrong with me, contributing to the hope and happiness ideas in the story? O_o I need to get back into my maliciously angsty frame of mind... I know! I'll go read the beginning of this again. ^_^
MystDragon2k
2005-03-05
ch 1,
abuseWONDERFUL! Great to see you back on the site, and not the least bit rusty. Don't think your storys are the least bit bad...cause they are far from it. Got to hand it to you, you are superb at angsty storys. 10/10.
Neo Aguni
2005-03-05
ch 1,
abuseonce again great job.
I hope you do make a third story and if you need a brain to poke just holler

plz make another
Star Way
2005-03-05
ch 1,
abuseYES! Something from you... I've been missing your fics. (Also, I haven't been getting any alert e-mails from the site so that's really been annoying. But I can't tell you how excited I was to see a fic from you on the just in page.)

In any case, this fic was amazing. I love angst and I love Aelita!angst even more. :D It was so beautifully written, I could feel her emotions and understand her thoughts and see her in Lyoko all alone, wishing she knew just how to handle herself...

A truly awesome fic. ^_^ I love it.
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