and you never updated again...

heh.. had to say that..

it started good.. s

ended.. ehh.. bad..

see ya

Good fic! I was really wondering how would you explain Ryouga's sense of direction if he wasn't a real Hibiki, and I must say that the explanation was very creative. I sure hope that you'll continue this fic since I'm wondering what's in the egg?

Please continue!

Umm...you ARE going to write more of this, right? I really hope so...

Since Ryoga is supposed to get his sense of direction from his parents, I guess environment is more important than heredity after all. 8)

Very good. A few grammar problems (mostly tenses), but you've got a good storyline and the characterization down pat. I'd really like to see more, if you decide to continue this... evil evil cliffhanger...

Um...just to let you know...you do know that 'Yuria' is the scientific name for pee right? *sweatdrop*

I love this story! .

More please! I really want to know what happens!

MORE you have got to write more of this story

Hey with Ranma and Kuno fighting where was Ryoga? Great chapter! More!

good story. hope to read more soon.

I loved it! hurry up with the next chapter.

Shinigami-chan

Talk about confrontations! This is like a soap opera! Truly a touching story! I wonder what happens to Akane and the 2 brothers?

This is great. Pretty funny at some parts to. You stuck Lum in! So neato! I loved it

A fresh new perspective! Love the story! Hope you post the next chapter soon!