Wow! You story is so awsome. excuse me if I mis-spell some thing my computer does not have spell cheak. Any way as I was saying you should write some more to this story. You have a great talent as a writer and your story is off the charts. I hope I can read some more to this.

best of luck with future stories
A random friend
Marissa.
P.S. I don't think you should change your writing style at all.

(squeals) very cute I loved it!

that was beautiful...I'm crying. I love your writing.

(shifty eyes) what IS on that note? I loved this chapter. More cute!

OMG that is so adorable!

Aw, cute! btw this is Kurama Babe from gaia. I hope to enjoy the rest of your fics. (flys off to read another chapter)

that was actually quite
good.

i can't belive i read that. i loved it...but...i'm not saposed to like hiei kurama fics. its almost like a rule. i am a major Kurama fan girl. any way...i loved it.

(squeals from kawaiiness) ITS SO KAWAII! (sniff) So romantic! The bed was a nice touch! (grins) I wonder what they'll be doing on that bed. Neways, its a great story

That was sweet! ^^ keep writing!

Haha...my temple, ne? Hi it's me form AC, and well nice fic so far...I'll have to read the rest

^ ^ Well read mine, see ya!

:)

"So soft and cute." He sniffs the back of Hiei's head. "And needs a bath."

"Shut up! Stupid fox!" Hiei struggles just enough to get free from Kurama's grasp.

That has to be my faviorte part! It reminds me of what I do to my friends, though I never tell them they need a bath, I just like to tell them there cute... but then they think I like them... so I try not to tell them often...

GOOD STORY!

I'll read the rest when I get a chance! But good story! I really like it so far! YAY!

That was so sweet.