This poem shows how someone can be to busy to accept love in their heart. I believe that it was well written. An idea to consider. Be more specific on the type of person that you are not seeing ?

I just wanted you to know that I thought this was beautiful!! So many people ignore His Spirit because they are too self-involved, or too afraid to open up to God. God bless you for writing this. You were truly inspired.

Wow!
What do you mean your no poet!?
Kep it up!
God Bless!