|Reviews for Braver World|
| Texty Monster Halcyon 12/27/10 . chapter 6
Your writing voice is very fitting with a story like this. It is written pretty well and is very thought-provoking which is very nice. It's a pleasantly rebellious tone that gells nicely with the different elements of the story.
My only complaints would be to watch for missing commas, reign in a little of the capitalization, and to cite some of the poetry you use. Fix those little issues up, and this will be good to go.
Happy writing! :)
| Kay Nastalia 8/8/07 . chapter 7
Wow... I really liked this. The ending was a bit abrupt, but it was an excellent read. Fantastic job.
| born to be hanged 3/8/05 . chapter 1
I liked what you said in your first paragraph, that they were still all doomed. They were only different because they knew that they were doomed. That's deep.
I spotted some missing commas, but that was about it.
Bravo, this was a nice piece. It makes one think, just like Huxley's book. Cheers.