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Mtbanger 2006-09-15 . chapter 5
Hey, been ages, yeah, just wonderin if you dropped from the face of the earth or something ^^ I really liked you stories btw. Hope you update again, if not... meh, they were great stories.

Just wanted to tell you take, take care :P

Mtbanger
Spira'sSentry 2005-08-22 . chapter 11
Oi... Really nice cliff hanger! Great fighting scenes before the end. That was a nice touch! Good job - update!
Love your story 2005-07-31 . chapter 11
Cool Story! Continue the good work!
Mtbanger 2005-07-07 . chapter 11
no! dnt stop udating! :-(

o, btw, i'm writting a new story "Final Fantasy X: The Disgraced Summoner" if you want to check that out... anyway, dont stop this story, it's very, very good! later!
Eriks leadinglady 2005-07-07 . chapter 11
Wow! Finally an update! This was a good chapter! Hope you update soon!
Mtbanger 2005-06-10 . chapter 10
shock and horror! WO! tidus is back! ARGH! Pain and rikku are dieing... :'(

Great chapter, as allways good battle scenes :D
Mtbanger 2005-06-10 . chapter 9
Oh DIE seymor! :D great chappy, but you do spell the word 'Does' as 'Dose' which confuses me a bit..

Samurai Warriors is such a cool Game! i know which katana you are on about... how could she just pull that thing out of nowhere like a katana? (its probably bigger than she is!) :D anyway, great chap. keep it up!
Spira'sSentry 2005-05-31 . chapter 10
AWESOME CHAPTER! Enjoyed the fight scenes you've written! Sorry, I tried to submit reviews and stuff but the website wouldn't let me log on until right now... Good Job! Update soon.
Eriks leadinglady 2005-05-17 . chapter 10
Great chapter! This is getting really good! And I do believe that there are a few other people reading this story... so I am not the only one you are updating for! Though I do feel flattered that you still updated it for me. : ) Well, hope to see another chappie soon!
~ Nicole
Mtbanger 2005-05-06 . chapter 4
brillinat fight scenes again, i did see that you called yuna 'yuan' sometimes and overused the phrase 'ya know?' with wakka a bit though... anyway, great chapter nontheless :D
Mtbanger 2005-05-06 . chapter 3
YAY!! TIDUS!! great fighting scene, you seem to be very talented at those, not mutch in way of improvement there... not much that needs improving at all really... :D
Eriks leadinglady 2005-05-03 . chapter 9
Another great chapter! Oh, and on your question about your dialogue... it is not bad, no definately not bad. It could use some work though, but nobody's story is perfect. but you do fit the charcters well. Anyways, update soon!

~Nicole
Eriks leadinglady 2005-04-29 . chapter 8
Good chapter! But the fight scene on the celsius went on a little too long... but other than that, it was an awesome chapter! PLease update soon!

~Nicole
Mtbanger 2005-04-29 . chapter 2
Good Chapter, some ncie fight scenes and the way you wrote about the summoning of the Aeons was spot-on! I thought that your description of Yunalesca sounded alot like Lenne though... anyway! great chapter!
Mtbanger 2005-04-26 . chapter 1
V. good!
the 1st chapter contained briliant fighting scenes and the personality of Rikku is written well. Keep going! (even though that you have) Don't stop! great fic!
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