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Weasel-Silver24
2009-07-09 . chapter 11
Stinkie has a really dirty mind, I personally think schools the things they do today, but what can ya say. Anyway, I'm already reading chap12, and boy is Carrigan mean! Great job!

P.S: Chaos Emerald: Wanted! Please feel free to read it, a Sonic story. (Nack/Rouge)
Weasel-Silver24
2009-03-24 . chapter 10
Good chapter, I like the part where Kat gave Casper a kiss on the head, very sweet. Good work!
Weasel-Silver24
2009-03-24 . chapter 9
Not bad, a little on the gross side. Stinkie shouldn't have been doing that, but oh well. Heh! Oh Casper better be careful looking those ingredients or he's going to be in BIG trouble!
Weasel-Silver24
2009-03-21 . chapter 8
Boy are those ghosts playing Melle's heart like a banjo, and Stinkie shouldn't doing her like that... Since he likes Melle, but it goes show one should always watch out and be on gaurd or they may get hurt. Great story!
Weasel-Silver24
2009-03-20 . chapter 7
That Alvers is mean, wanting to tear down Whipstaff Manor how sad. Who's Dibs? The Trio?

Just a little tip: The part where Casper is thinking, there's a little typeo "I'm a ghost and she's a human." Should be "he" right? No big deal. Great Chapter!
Weasel-Silver24
2009-03-20 . chapter 6
No Kidding about "Trouble Stirs", boy are thoses Ghosts doing trouble! You really got a nack for writing Casper stories, excelent work!
Weasel-Silver24
2009-03-19 . chapter 5
Boy! Stinkie is really mean, but sounds like him to do that. Fun and funny story!
Weasel-Silver24
2009-03-19 . chapter 4
Great chapter! The part where Melle was talking the Stinkie was very light-hearted, and close to end of Chap 4 was funny with perfume. It sounds like Melle shouldn't have bragged about not being about to smell anything as she claim. Great job!
Weasel-Silver24
2009-03-19 . chapter 3
That's funny, ** after the pizza and all those other ghosts driving the two girls crazy! Very Casper like, great story!
Weasel-Silver24
2009-03-02 . chapter 2
Great chapter, I feel sorry for Melle, she not having an easy time of it. But either is Kat, good work!
Weasel-Silver24
2009-03-01 . chapter 1
Great chapter very good beginning! Feel free to visit my stories!
Rini1986
2009-01-29 . chapter 17
Love that first kiss between Melle and Stinkie/Boomer! Great description! The romance you have introduced into these last few chapter has been so much fun to read and *drool* over! Of course, the humor and interactions between the ghosts and the living are always well-written from you, but it was good to see you dig a little deeper and write romance from your soul and heart, Melle. Can't wait to read more...
Rini1986
2009-01-29 . chapter 16
OMG! Oh...I'm crying here! When Ghastly and Stretch finally recognized each other--that was so romantic and the best scene! I could almost see the gorgeous jet-black haired man, smoking a cigar, and tickling the keys...whew! Who WOULDN'T remember that? *sighs dreamily*
Rini1986
2009-01-25 . chapter 15
Oh, my gosh, this is the best yet! I loved the scene where Casper and Kat are in his mother's sunroom (I always wanted to know more about Casper's mother), and a few snippets of detail about Stretch and JT's relationship (I didn't know Stretch could play the piano).

And, of course, Melle and Stinkie in the race and the Tunnel of Love was hilarious, and yet touching and very romantic at the same time. The scene was perfectly balanced. Great job!
Rini1986
2009-01-25 . chapter 14
I just saw you added a new chapter! Wow! I will read that immediately after I leave a review for this chapter!

LOVED IT! Great job with the characters and the dialogue (of which I am extremely jealous of--*winks**smiles*). And the interactions of Melle and Stinkie is always so much fun to read! Very in character that he would take her to a carnival/fair (esp. since a there is a saying in the South where I live that when someone is "carny", they smell really bad, which fits Stinkie perfectly!) Wonderful and cute and funny, as always!
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