 Raging Pineapples 2009-07-25 . chapter 1A pleasure to read =) |
 Ren 2005-07-15 . chapter 1 What can I say?
Short,simple, sweet, and leaves me with a warm feeling.
Here, Here!! |
 Yyunesprith 2005-04-06 . chapter 1 Aw... |
 Raven Aorla 2005-03-27 . chapter 1I like it very much. A short but worthy poetic tribute. |
 Nathalia Potter 2005-03-16 . chapter 1How very true.
I love this. |
 Werecat99 2005-03-08 . chapter 1I loved that. It was deep and beautiful and definitely a different take in Tolkien's theology. I particularly loved the term "household gods", as in the deitis that take care of the "little thing": the child who has mumps, the plow that broke, the restless livestock.
A joy to read, as always. |
 Mirfein 2005-03-08 . chapter 1This is a nice theme, very rarely played upon. I love the beauty of the simplicy and truth of the words. It rests the mind.
I also love the last line. Perfect closure.
~Mirfein |
 Vana Tuivana 2005-03-07 . chapter 1Ah, how pretty. I applaud you for bringing the kind of quiet, simple dignity and power that they deserve to these ignored Valier.
"We move our world in little ways, but when our brothers and greater sisters have done their work, we shall keep it whole."
I did enjoy this little drabble. Nice writing! |