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Raging Pineapples
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
A pleasure to read =)
Ren
2005-07-15 . chapter 1
What can I say?
Short,simple, sweet, and leaves me with a warm feeling.
Here, Here!!
Yyunesprith
2005-04-06 . chapter 1
Aw...
Raven Aorla
2005-03-27 . chapter 1
I like it very much. A short but worthy poetic tribute.
Nathalia Potter
2005-03-16 . chapter 1
How very true.

I love this.
Werecat99
2005-03-08 . chapter 1
I loved that. It was deep and beautiful and definitely a different take in Tolkien's theology. I particularly loved the term "household gods", as in the deitis that take care of the "little thing": the child who has mumps, the plow that broke, the restless livestock.

A joy to read, as always.
Mirfein
2005-03-08 . chapter 1
This is a nice theme, very rarely played upon. I love the beauty of the simplicy and truth of the words. It rests the mind.

I also love the last line. Perfect closure.

~Mirfein
Vana Tuivana
2005-03-07 . chapter 1
Ah, how pretty. I applaud you for bringing the kind of quiet, simple dignity and power that they deserve to these ignored Valier.

"We move our world in little ways, but when our brothers and greater sisters have done their work, we shall keep it whole."

I did enjoy this little drabble. Nice writing!
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