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| Moiya Hatake 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseIt's hard to find words to praise a story that is written so well it captivates the reader and makes them want to cry at the same time. A wonderful story and unique insight into the mind of one of the best and most elusive characters ever created. |
| TsumiNoAru 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuse*sobbing* this is such a beautiful, wonderful and sad piece! I don't know what else to say. You have all my respekt as a writer! I beg you for more...! *add to favorites* |
| RandomTopic 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abuseSad. I love the last line though because a scream would sum up his reaction to everything that he's seen since he died. |
| tsuki 2007-07-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. Just WOW. This is so beautiful. Absolutely amazing, I love it! Well written and full of emotions, I was so touched. So deep. Oh and I really LOVE this pairing as well. I look forward to reading more of your works. :) |
| cdkobasiuk 2007-04-01 ch 1, | abuseKami, you killed me with this. I feel like I'm bleeding out sorrow. Brilliant. And the surprise was intense. cdk |
| Seshura 2006-12-27 ch 1, | abusethis was rather interesting? Are there more chapters to be posted here or is this it. I would like to read more. |
| AccentFetish 2006-09-20 ch 1, | abuseI really liked the last line. This story was excellent :) |
| ElasticBobaTurtle 2005-07-29 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was brilliant, beautiful imagery. Gah. I love your fics. So deep and probing. |
| Kasmi Kassim 2005-07-19 ch 1, | abuseOh my goodness, splendid story. You really need to write more about Yondaime and Kakashi, there aren't enough of those and you write beautifully! Wonderful job! |
| Rainmusic 2005-04-13 ch 1, | abuseI like your version better, too. |
| Yuen-chan 2005-03-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseI don't know why I'm blinking back tears. I know you probably made this out to be somewhat angsty, but I'm stupid and now I'm overreacting. Bah. |
| Ava Addemdum 2005-03-27 ch 1, | abuseu used the word ethereal in ur story..hehe...that's not the point... i have finally found another yondaimexkakashi story! in the naruto catergory which contains 60 something fics, i could only find 3. 3 fics of this pairing. life is so hard. and it seems like all of them have the tendencies of making kakashi's love life hell. ^_^ thank u so much for writing this fic; it was tainted with a beautiful sense of sadness. looking forward to more work from u soon. p.s "...he wishes he were alive again..." shouldn't it be "he wishes he WAS..."? then again, i don't have the best grammar llb. |
| hiro 2005-03-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseheartachingly beautiful, I hail this piece of writing. I ache for both kakashi and yondaime, and i *wished* there was something yondaime could do to spare kakashi some pain ;_;... beautiful writing. your fics and chevira lowe's fics really make me fall hard for fucked up kakashi :D. will it be too much if I ask (ok, BEG) for more yondaime x kakashi fics ^^? |
| Clemence 2005-03-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseAn other stunning ff... As always your writting is dark and captivating. So much angst and pain... |
| b-s 2005-03-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice! I was very absorbed in it. Well-written, too. |