 xanimejunkie 2007-03-30 . chapter 1o.o!! aww dude... that was awesome!! i love cid's last line. go south park. >.< keep on writing!! ^.^ |
 oathk33p3r 2005-03-31 . chapter 1that was violent, but funny. GREAT JOB! lol...jenova the puppet... |
 A Chick 2005-03-07 . chapter 1 Dude, I love the South Park line at the end, and it's very funny and well written :D |
 SilentRider 2005-03-07 . chapter 1It was ok. Basicly a South Park spoof gone horribly wrong. You can do better but good job. |
 Story Weaver1 2005-03-07 . chapter 1that was werid, but still funny. |
 Twizzellie 2005-03-06 . chapter 1 That was... Interesting. It's funny how you made it sound like South Park. |
 Sai-ryo Aura Feana 2005-03-06 . chapter 1^_^ HehehehahahahahaMUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
I love it! |