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Neferius
2008-05-26
ch 10,
abuseI liked how you sent them back to the alternate past, it made another good addition to your NG: Goddess series.
But then it moved on to something else and then...stopped. It's a cliffhanger thats really bugging me.
I still have more to read but right now I'm curious how this ended.
Read ya Later.
Zero Asakura
2007-10-21
ch 10,
abuseHello
well...
i've been thinking... but can't sort it well enough to post it in a forum or something of the sort

could you later write another "visit to the past" say... with Dawn and Mana? daugher and mother, Valkyrie and Half-breed Demoness

well

i quite enjoy the NGG series i gotta admit

i wish you the best!
Kotetsu 117
2007-05-29
ch 1,
abusegreat
Kotetsu 117
2007-05-24
ch 10,
abuseGreat
Miroku-dono
2005-07-27
ch 10,
abuseInteresting story line along with your entire Neon Genesis Goddess timeline of stories.

I have to admit it gets a bit confusing in the earlier writings, but it is still very good.

I hope to see you continue on with your wonderful stories.
Anexsis Hirotomi
2005-06-16
ch 10,
abuseHey Slayer! Good luck with the move and sorry for not being able to review. I hope you know that what little time I get on the net I print off your fics. That way I can read them when I got the time. But I AM reading them. But why did you have to pull a cliffy? EVIL CLIFFIES! I'm 90% sure who got shot. (Kinda obvious) But can't wait to read more.

Forever in waiting.
JA-NE!
Slayer6
2005-05-19
ch 1,
abuseone lousy misplaced name...

I hope you all realise I had stuff on my mind at the time I was cleaning up and posting that chapter.
Marcos Edson
2005-05-02
ch 10,
abuseWhat! How's that Mana sneaked into Yoko's and Ken's bed?

"I just realized." *Mana* muttered, "Mom doesn't know yet."

LOL... ^_^ And yes, that's a nasty cliffhanger...

Now, leaving the fics aside, good luck with your new job and moving.
Marcos Edson
2005-05-02
ch 9,
abuseOh, and just when we were expecting an epilogue of sorts... ^_^
Marcos Edson
2005-05-02
ch 8,
abuseAw, the day adds new stuff is also the day I don't get the alerts for this chapter and the next, not fun... >.<
Anyway, good one, for a moment I really thought Mana would give evil Hild a small bit of her ST powers... Only thing I miss here is some interaction between the Guardians and the past people, it would be interesting to see their reaction to the fact that Rei was once one of the Messengers... And knowing that the Soultaker was Hild's sister, making Mana really a relative of her and Urd, was an interesting addition, I'm looking forward a family reunion between Hild, Urd and Mana... ^_^
NefCanuck
2005-05-02
ch 10,
abuseWhat a nasty cliffhanger you've left us with... well written but most vexing ;)
Barricade
2005-05-02
ch 10,
abuseI second the Sentaro-Dawn pairing!
Now lets see, up where the Shogun was is all the kids and Kensuke (Celes, now being a full on vamp doesn't even need to worry about bullets). I'm guessing either Belldandy or Sentaro got nailed however. Sayoko wouldn't go completely nuts as this time she'd know Kensuke would be heading to heaven to wait for her. Her son however...or Mom.
Also I'm guessing again, but I bet that somehow the Alt-Hell got involved with the rogue demons over here.
One thing that I really want(ed) to see is if Arael's use of her powers woke up the angels in the Alt-verse. Now THAT could get interesting considering there isn't any EVAs ready to fight them yet.
dennisud
2005-05-02
ch 10,
abuseWow a great Cliffhanger and i HATE Cliffys with a passion.
So far this is becoming one oif the best stories you have done so far. laving the mystery of who was shot and probably killed is good.

A suggestion let Dawn and Sentaro become chummy. a good pairing for later stories.

dennisud
NefCanuck
2005-05-01
ch 9,
abuseWell, things certainly have taken an interesting turn... bait indeed... but bait always has the possibility of backfiring... here's hoping that's not the case...

Well done and awaiting next chapter eagerly
Alheime
2005-05-01
ch 9,
abuseHm...why does this story hint that maybe Sentaro might be joining the divine world sooner or later? ;)

>Calamite
Spear Mint and Cool Mint, as unusual it is, is the official name for Lind's angels.
It appears in volume 25~26 during the Tenshikui arc.
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