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| Vie-Boheme 2005-07-12 ch 1,  | abuseI loved this! The song fits in so well with Wyatt. I also love how Wyatt still cares so much about Chris and vice versa. Great job! |
| Ligia Elena 2005-05-04 ch 1, | abuseAn interesting, believable look into Wyatt's perspective. I've come across other stories that have been used the idea that Wyatt killed Piper, but yours is the only one that I found credible, because you don't paint him as some inhuman, heartless monster. It was an accident that she died, but you still kept the serious weight of the idea that it was his fault because he responded violently to a threat to his power. Great job! |
| Aldrea7 2005-03-30 ch 1, | abuseWow...I wanna say more than that but I just don't think I can do justice to this story with words, so just wow. |
| Nathy1000000 2005-03-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseReally impressive. I loved both brother’s perspective. I especially loved Chris’ remorse of failing his brother but how he faced him anyway. And Wyatt was just great, loving his little brother but too lost in his addiction of power to see what he was doing. The song was great. Wonderful story and great ending! It was a cool one shot but if you have a story in mind I’m sure it would be great. |
| heartfallen 2005-03-07 ch 1, | abuseThat was SO good! It was just perfect. Everything was just perfect. |
| IcantthinkofaFnick 2005-03-06 ch 1, | abuseThis was very good! You should continue it! |