The more I read your stories, the more I realize how excellent of a writer you are. This oneshoot is no exception. You kept Shadow in character. You described the confusion within his mind with unfailing detail. I am astounded by your skillful writing. This is a wonderful story! My favorite list is getting longer as it is filled with your intricate stories!

-N.R.

To help me improve my writing skills in both fanfiction and fiction, I rate and review various short stories through out the web. Today, I chose your story to rate and this is what I had to say:

Rating: 4 out 5
Explanation: This story was well written and funny all at the same time. If I wasn't so careful about giving stories a perfect score than I would have given this story a 5 out of 5 instead. You managed to keep all of the characters in character as well as establish a nice, short plot. Your story has made its way into my favorites.

~WriterGurlLW, Admin of Writers Haven (writershaven.tk)

Nice! I liked it! ^_^
-The All Real Numbers Symbol

I LOVE IT! ^_^ 'Nuff said.

Hee! Absolutely adorable, and just so... Shadow. :) I know pretty much zip on Fleetway (Don't hurt me), but I obviously didn't have to be to enjoy this. ^_^ Very cute.

It's good!
yeah...
um...
*goes back to the Stc-o forum*

that was cool

heehee :) typical shadow :)

I really like this story! i also like some of your other fics. like the sequel to 'inocence' i think it was called 'With You'. are you ever going to finish it? it said you havn't updated since 2002! If you are hving writter's block, e-mail me at:
dilciad@
because i have some cool ideas for that story!