Very nice, too bad this is a one shot, I would have liked to see more.

You certainly have a way with words. I'm in awe at your writing prowess. I've begun to absolutely adore your writing. *puts you in favs* I wish I could write with such elegant and grace, you have a gift, and use it well.

Very, very nice and well-written. You have a real way with words.

- Blue Artemis

Why can't I write like /that/? Why...? *starts to sob uncontrollably* This is so perfect, so poetic! I just love your characterization of Beatrix and Kuja, the atmosphere, the dialogue, your choice of words and the constant tension... ah! I'm adding this to Sable-Fahndu's C2 /right now/. In fact, I really, /really/ wish I had my own Beatrix community – because if I had, I would've certainly added all your Beatrix-Kuja stories!

Please, keep up the awesome work!