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Reviews For: Beauty and the Spark

LeoDiabla
2005-03-26
ch 1,
abuseGeez, Ash...c'mon, man, tell me when you write incredible stuff like this! =) I love Ray's insight. You've got the male POV down perfectly! LOL...

Keep Rockin'!
Clez
2005-03-21
ch 1,
abuseI really don't like Rayla, but... BUT, I did like this ficlet and how you wrote it; very intriguing style, and pulled off nicely. Well done.

~Clez
fc2001
2005-03-13
ch 1,
abuseI love this. It's not an easy narrative style to master, but you've done it fabulously. I'm really feeling the Ray/Neela thing at the moment, and it's an absolute joy to read such quality writing for the couple!
Looking forward to reading more of your work soon.
Lol, Fi.
RayGla
2005-03-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseSO GOOD!
And so true!
xox Steph xox
2005-03-08
ch 1,
abuseThis is good, it really shows the Neela Ray thing - i think that they should get together. PLease write some more !
lilphi07
2005-03-07
ch 1,
abuseI love your story please continue, I love Neela and Ray fanfiction
funkycool
2005-03-07
ch 1,
abusesame
really good one shot
i like it! :)
you're really talented!
HP-Magic
2005-03-06
ch 1,
abusereally good job. i'm so sad about this little ER break. i'm so deprived. haha. hopefully in the upcomign episodes Neela and Ray finally realize they were meant to be
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