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| LeoDiabla 2005-03-26 ch 1, | abuseGeez, Ash...c'mon, man, tell me when you write incredible stuff like this! =) I love Ray's insight. You've got the male POV down perfectly! LOL... Keep Rockin'! |
| Clez 2005-03-21 ch 1, | abuseI really don't like Rayla, but... BUT, I did like this ficlet and how you wrote it; very intriguing style, and pulled off nicely. Well done. ~Clez |
| fc2001 2005-03-13 ch 1, | abuseI love this. It's not an easy narrative style to master, but you've done it fabulously. I'm really feeling the Ray/Neela thing at the moment, and it's an absolute joy to read such quality writing for the couple! Looking forward to reading more of your work soon. Lol, Fi. |
| RayGla 2005-03-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseSO GOOD! And so true! |
| xox Steph xox 2005-03-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is good, it really shows the Neela Ray thing - i think that they should get together. PLease write some more ! |
| lilphi07 2005-03-07 ch 1, | abuseI love your story please continue, I love Neela and Ray fanfiction |
| funkycool 2005-03-07 ch 1, | abusesame really good one shot i like it! :) you're really talented! |
| HP-Magic 2005-03-06 ch 1, | abusereally good job. i'm so sad about this little ER break. i'm so deprived. haha. hopefully in the upcomign episodes Neela and Ray finally realize they were meant to be |