OMG Chapter: 1 is in tru thor fashion!! Lovin it!! AND LMAO

You write the best dialogue I think I've ever read. It cracks me up!

Thor... Ordained over the Internet...

Somehow, that feels like the 'little grey guy' has spent way too much time around humans...

Wow! Impressive, his story was amazing, and even beyond just "amazing" it's very well written and the plt is awesome, it was so funny at points i laughed with tears in my eyes. (teal'c-o-lette ;D) And anyway, it was so awesome that i read it all tonight. I wish i had time to continue with the sequel right away ;) Amazing and awesome work, you're very talented!

-Kate

this is the BEST story i have ever read! you are a brilliant author and i am so going to read the sequel right now!

awesome!

OMG, I so loved the end conversation between GG and Thor! That was SO awesome and so Thor in many ways. Oh Eve, thank you, I wish I could put into words how much I enjoyed this, how deeply moved I am by this whole story. You've done a wonderful and amazing thing here, you really have. Thank you!

I don't usually like peanut butter since I had way too much of it as a kid, but the combination sounds great. Then again I regularly eat pickles with hot fudge sundays and I'm not even pregnant.

This is great!

Sam

Okay, I just have to say that I'm still a bit surprised it took Sam to figure out the Temporal Dilation, but she was a bit distracted. This is so cool! I'm sitting here still giddy from the wedding, and now, they are expecting! Sweet!

Sam

Awesome! I know the rest of the family wasn't there, but this was just perfect for them. Better eh? Thank you Harlan! (giggling to herself)

Great work Eve!

I know you said there are no original ideas out there anymore, but what makes this so precious, and I do mean precious, is the way you're expressing the ideas. The way you're allowing all the people we all know and love so much to express themselves while doing something we've all been waiting so long to happen!

Thanks,

Sam

Actually, yes, as CIC he can legally marry people. General Hammond could also do it as well, as CO of the Mountain, and as the Captain of a ship, Thor could legally marry people if he brought them up to the ship. Though it being an alien spacecraft in orbit around earth, I'm not totally sure of that one.

At least that's what I can think of. (Yes, I ended that sentence in a preposition! On PURPOSE! ;-o) Jack can call me a ** later.)

I love the fact that you got Kate's dress, I love that dress, and Carter will be able to pull it off perfectly. I just wish the rest of SG-1 could be there as well as Cassie, Janet, George and Jacob.

Sam

Oh my! I'm crying tears of happiness right now, this was even better than I'd hoped it would be. Awesome! For being stuck in a cabin, Jack done good! More men like him and I wouldn't be a widow right now.

Thanks Eve, this is wonderful!

Sam

Actually someone DID get the baby cats reference, I'd just felt that my comment was long enough, plus I've always felt that it was "Spooky's" personal way of making Scully wince just a little. Plus it's just so damn cute!

Speaking of cute, this chapter was all that and a bag of chips!

Frankly I so respect you choice not to go all M or R with the evolution of their sexual relationship, cause frankly, for me at least, it's so much better this way, and it so wouldn't be them. I'm sure guys might be disappointed, but this is perfect "girl **" in ways specifically because it's so tasteful and leaves much to the imagination.

You Rock Eve! Thank you!

Sam

OMG I love this chapter! So totally right on for the both of them! You've certainly gotten inside their heads and hearts Eve, Brava! Carter speechless TWICE?!?!? I knew it would have to happen here somewhere on the way to Jordan, and I just loved the way you've woven everything together! You totally Rock!

Sam

Wow Eve. I'm so glad this chapter was here, and so glad you gave it the detail and respect it so deserved. I have seen S/J ship where they've hooked up quite successfully, but this day didn't get included. Not because it didn't happen, but because it wasn't germane. This confluence of circumstances however pretty much made this chapter a requirement.

I can so relate to what Carter was talking about, well really to both of what they were dealing with on so many levels. Right now I'm five years older than my Mom ever was, and at times, that really freaks me out. I lost her when she was in her very late thirties, and so turning a year older than she was back always rattled me. Each year it gets less painful, but no less bizarre. I mean I know we are all supposed to out live our parents, I just never expected it to be at such a young age.

Despite being in my early forties, I'm also a widow, and the husband and children I'd dreamed of growing old with, and the children they would have had, my grandchildren, never came to be. So I can relate to how Jack was feeling, to what he was thinking, because it's a headspace I often find myself in and hate. What if? Where? When?

Mind you I'm more in Carter's league (My first name is Samantha, and many of my family members have nicknamed me Carter for a good reason) when it comes to M-Theory and have even, during Kel-no-reem had contact with one of my alternates briefly. It was so interesting, and gave me a touch of hope actually that all was not lost so to speak. Why? Because she was not only still married, but happily so, and had the two wonderful children I'd been dreaming of all my life. I met her because we were both doing Kel-no-reem at the same time, thinking about the same thing. It was amazing.

Anyway, before you grab your head in pain and grouse "Carter my head!" like so many of my family does, I'll take my leave and move onto the next chapter. I do want to say this was one of the best chapters in this story so far. Thank you for giving both Jack and Sam's respective pain room to unfold here, because despite what some folks might believe, they are both very emotional people, and success of the "experiment" could not happen without this. Jack still blames himself for the loss of Charlie and Sarah, no way they could really hookup so to speak with out this. Sam, yeah, she still so misses her Mom, has lasting pain, of that there can be no doubt.

So Thanks Eve, this is awesome! Any chance they will touch on Narim and Martouf? Those boys still have a bit of a place in her heart too.