they were good, i can't write poetry to save my life so, i have 2 say, ur's is better then mine ^_^ i hope u conitinue writting on the net cuz i really want 2 read more of ur stories so cya

R.J

People tend to read more stories than poems so aim for that next time. but still very good rhyming!

This is really good, your very good at writing poems keep it up. And thank you for reviewing my story,Loning. Tell you the truth I'm not crazy about it, I actually like my other story better.
-Emerald*~

This is cute! good job!

Yay! This was soo cute! you did great!;)