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Yay! Four Swords stuff!

So hard to find!

Thank you.

Four lines in this chapter made me bust out laughing. The first was "He was a goddamn natural." I dont know why but it did. The next was “He can’t swallow, that’s all. No big deal.” Then “Hah. You think that’s loud, you should have heard him last night.” And last “And I would love it if you two would stop being so mushy! Eww!” It was just simply funny. I loved it. Poor Poe didn't get any action. Well, I suppose he is just a kid.
Poe-I'M NOT A KID DAMN IT!
Well, I suppose he is just a minor. Eheheh! Loved the story. I hope you write a sequel. Mabey to the part were the Links fight Vaati. Tho I love Vaati so much! You have talent. Never stop writing!
~Linkphan aka Red (Red Link)

L0L "He's a little possessive" great story, keep it up

o.,o *epic nosebleed* MANSEX! *My mom walks over* Did you say MANSEX? Me- No... the computer did! Mom- Oh... wait what!? Me-Iloves you mom! Mom- *eyes me closely befor walking away* I love this chapter! Yes! Next chapter will have Rikuo and Yuki mansex! Finaly! Thankyou! :3

Yesh! Have a feeling the smex will happen NEXT chapter! Yayz! Dark's taller! XD I loves this story! Must-finish-reading-...*eys twitches*

GODDAMN IT! I READ THE WHOLE ** STORY IN ONE NIGHT! T_T

It kept me up from around 11:30 PM I took a break for homework and came back to it and finished it at like 4:00 AM!

Started Reading 12-3-2008 (Late at night)
Finished Reading 12-4-2008 (Early morning)

It was awesome! I still like VioxShadow and RedxBlue more though.

Great story! I can't wait for your next works!

This story made me drool...
Lol, JK, JK. ^^

It was really great and entertaining. I really love DLxL! ^^ But I liked the others as well.

~LittleFoxDemon~

Nice!

yay, yaoi!

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Review:

Despite a few... okay, a lot, of gramatical and spelling errors, I like it. I'm only halfway through chapter five, but it is a truly original story.

I was hesitant to read it at first, I tend to stay away from anything that has to do with Wind Waker. I'm glad I gave it a chance, though! The character's personalities are developed well for the most part. The plot is fantastic so far.

You must know that I am very picky about lemon scenes. The Dark/Link scene earlier wasn't spectacular, but it was still exceptional in my opinion.

I'll continue reading. This story is well on it's way to being another of my favorites. Good job.

I LOVE this story if u can please wright more link X dark link *beggs* PLEASE!

this srory is so cute and funny. please write more.

ah i loved it you m,ake good yaoi!lol i love man action hahaha weird i know

Ah!! it's so good XD better than what i thought it would be. And, do i smell a continue