wow! i like how you start the story. and i wonder whats brothering Ash mom ;/

I loved this story! It immersed me into it and I just couldn't stop reading it!
You are one talented author! I thank you for taking the time to make this story. I love you ^_^

(Overall review) Wow! I can't believe how excellent this story was! Ash and his family were portrayed so perfectly. And jeez, Ash was a total sweetheart (but, seriously, when isn't he? ^_^). I can truly picture him pulling the stunts he did in this story (so cute). Delia and Jay's background was very insightful, too. If Ash's dad ever does make it to the anime I hope he's like Jay. The Pokeshippy hints were well-appreciated, too. I laughed, I cried (which doesn't normally happen for me), and I read this story twice before reviewing (which I don't normally read fanfics [especially as long as this one] more than once). Bravo! You are so talented!

YES! You left a little Misty/Ash for us. Maybe a sequal with his parents and Brock helping them get together? You know, as payback. xD That would be awesome. PLEASE? I loved this story really. Made me smile alot... I think my uncle was weirded out. :D Anyways, great job. I LOVED THIS. Alot. (:

Angelica

OMFGG* I LOVED IT! It was so sweet at the end, I feel lik either jumpin up n down, screamin, or cryin!
Faithful through and through,
maith
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(*OH MY F*IN GREAT GOD)
P.S I'm only 11, but I watch 15's lik The O.C, Family guy, and I want to watch One Tree Hill

Wow, I really like your storys, they are VERY good. I lik the christmassy, romance and detail in it. I dont like ... um... I DONT LIKE NOTHIN!
Faithful through and through,
Maith

Wow, this is pretty good! The characters are in character, the grammar is great, and the drama is really well written. I'm going to check out the rest of this story right away.

Just because you asked so nicely, I'll review. =) Honestly, when I read great stories, like your's, I always think, "Okay, I am definitely going to review this!" And then I don't. Which makes me feel kind of guilty sometimes. But you don't care; you just want to know what I think of your story. Not a very redeeming quality, if you ask me. (And you probably never would. Heck, I doubt you even care.) Rush, rush, rush. Never stop to smell the roses. Always so focused on where you're going you don't even notice when you pass your destination up. Course, that doesn't make much sense, but whatever. Anyway, I'll get to the review now. Sorry for wasting your time with all the random, irrelevant crap in this paragraph.
Spruceton --may I call you Spruceton? Or do you prefer Ms. Spook?-- Anyway, I love this story already and it's only the first chapter. I don't often read pokemon fanfiction because it's hard to find anything good involving the anime characters and I don't think most of the authors here are experienced and/or skilled enough to write a good pokemon story with original characters. I'm always glad when I do go looking for pokemon fanfiction because I always manage to find at least one thing I like. What makes me even happier is that I found your story right away.
I actually found the last story in this installment and I decided to read some of it to see if it was worth going back to the first ‘book.’ Believe me, it is. I was interested initially in the last one because it implied that Ash and Misty would be dating but your writing is what hooked me. I was confused, wondering why the trio would be deciding on a menu with Ash’s parents. I stopped reading shortly after Brock left the room but not in no way because I didn’t like what I was reading, but because my inquisitive nature wouldn’t allow me to go further without fully comprehending what was going on. I skimmed over your profile and I read the summaries of the ‘books’ and of some other stories and I decided there was no way I wouldn’t read this trilogy. Don’t be surprised if I review your other stories. Don’t expect it either because, like I implied, I’m a bad reviewer.
Right away, I was drawn in by the humor. I don’t usually watch the anime anymore (I might if they still had Misty) but I think you have everyone’s characters dead-on. I really like that Ash isn’t just calling his mom randomly to say hi but because it was recently her birthday. Since it was her birthday, it made me want to know even more why Delia was crying. Considering the summary for your story, I can guess pretty easily but I could just as easily be wrong. I also love how concerned Ash is for his mother. It’s very real and it shows how well Ash knows his mom and that he cares about her. And may I say this story is wonderfully detailed. I can clearly see what’s happening in my mind.
I am very glad this trilogy is already finished because normally when I find a story this good, I have to wait awhile for the next update. I really look forward to reading the next chapter and the rest of the series. I can’t think of a single thing I didn’t like in this chapter and I noticed no mistakes grammar or spelling wise, except for maybe a misplaced comma, but I’m never completely sure about them myself. However, you are a cheater. Why do I say that? You’re twenty-five! Sure, this particular story was written when you were in your late teens, but you probably had a lot of experience even then. That’s just plain unfair. All joking aside, you are a truly wonderful writer. Most people seem to like them but, if you’re one of the few who don’t, I apologize for leaving such a long review. I want to make sure I leave you a really good review at least once. I always seem to forget to or get side-tracked by something in the middle of one. Aside from that, a lot of reviews aren’t actual reviews. Hey, if you’re thinking of reading some of my stories because you really appreciate my review or for whatever else reason, I suggest you not. Both are old, they do not reflect my current writing skill at all, and I doubt you’re familiar with the Naruto series. Honestly, you don’t have to be to understand either story but nonetheless. (Hopefully) I want yap as much the next time I review. This is already longer than quite a few of the stories on this site.

a heart touching story. well... on 2 the sequel. CHA!

I'm crying again. U PR!CK. JK i havn't cried in over 10 years. Good Job.

aw, U made me cry. U D0UCHE... JK wha.

how cute.
also... Sorry my reviews will get better once i catch up. K

i played that before but we were just tossing balled up socks up in2 the fan. really friggen fun. CHA!

Gary's such a F@¢k Stain. CHA!

sofar sad, This is a MistxAsh story right?