your spelling is terrible

OMg i love it!!

I love it! =]
Update puh-leaze!

yay..update ! nice chapter.

DUN DUN DUN!

I'm excited.

You KNOW I love that Will/Liz action! Hahahaha, and the corpse! HAHAHAAHAH!! That's an excellent chapter!

Great job!

-williz

nice! wonderfully written story. it was so sweet that will went through all that trouble just 2 get the dress 4 elizabeth. at the beginning of the story though, the dream part, the language sort of made me wince, but the rest is lovely, very very lovely.

Wow what a great story. I loved it. You are pure genius well done. Will there be a next chapter cos I so want to read it. There isn't much more to say except that was bloody brilliant.

Well done and please write a few ore chapters
Georgia from London, England.

This is a good story, and I can't wait to read more!

Nice story... but poor virgin Will lol! Update soon!

WHOA! Will's daddy is here!!

It's makes me think of this song from the 1950's:

*sings* Daddy's home...Daddy's home to stay...I'm not a thousand miles away!

Oh yeah...*deep 1950's style voice*

So anywho, I LOVE THE CHAPTER!

-Karen

Bahaahahah! *gaspeth* Seriously, I'm totally in awe of your fantasticness writing skillness.

In awe. And I love the plot arising! I'm EXCITED!

SO EXCITED! *sings* I'm about to lose contro...and I think I like it!

K, sorry...I'll stop with the spazz-master routine now and just say it's hella good, chica.

More! MORE I TELL YOU!

Teehee!

-williz

OMG! That's the perfect twist! You are SO ingenius!

And I love the name...*wink wink*

Muahha!! You're lovely!

-Karen

Aw! Poor Will...poor Will's pocketwatch too. *nods*

And aw his pet-name for her is cute. You're very right about Jack making fun of it though. I can just see it.

"Oh, Lizbet!! Lizbet, come out here and give your man a kissy wissy!"

Will smacks his forehead with his hand.

"Jack Sparrow, if you don't bloody SHUT UP about that name right NOW, I'll shoot you myself!" Elizabeth stomps up to Will.

"And YOU!" Will cowers. "You told him the petname?! How could you?!?!"

"I'm sorry! Don't kill me!" Will kisses Elizabeth.

Sorry, had to add in the Will kisses Elizabeth part. I'm williz, for crying out loud! *wink*

-Karen

cha-CHING

YAY!

*holds parade in celebration*

THEY'RE TOGETHER AGAIN! WOOHO! You rock my sock, coolio Julio!

I love this story so much. You know what's weird? I'm actually talking to you RIGHT NOW on IM.

*twilight zone music plays* o! O.O

Ok, I'm a dork, I admit it...but hey, it used to be "cool" to be a dork.

Stay cool chica. Can't wait for Ch. 11!

-williz