This is really just perfect. 3

I love Ed's bluntness. So in-character. Everyone's characterization was spot on, and overall, I like it!

THIS IS AN AMAZING STORY. MY FAVOURITE ROYAI FANFIC. Great writing, good plot, and everyone's in character.

Love!

Very cute!

:)

awwwww I loved it! especially the end, I was scared at first I would find it too OOC, but I'm glad I read it! :)

good job

Holy... I have no words, absolutely NO WORDS. I am speechless at how amazingly well this fic was written. This story had everything: starting with humor, then moving to drama/angst, and then finally to romance. I can honestly say that this is one of the best Royai fanfiction I've read on this site.

WOWW..

AMAZING story!

congratulations the best royai one-shot Ive ever read xD

:] this is my favorite fma story. thank you for putting time and effort into this piece. ive always liked roy and riza pairings. :] thank you again. it was brilliantly written with well developed ideas.

It's very nice...

...geez, I probably say that to all the fics I've read...

but in all honesty, the story's great!

...meh, just came accross this when I was looking for some royai fics...

...damn writer's block...

...well, good luck with your fics!

Love this! My heart hurt when he said all the stuff and Riza heard it! OMG, how terrible! I love the Ed/Winry hints as well

wow... i can't write oneshots like that

i love this story!

so sweet. this pairing rocks.:)

This story is one of my favorites. _ Im a Royai fan too. Anyways, you did a great job on it. :) It was touching, and made me laugh also. Great job.

That was fantasitc! I love them as a couple and you kept them so much 'in' character that if flowed so well! Great job.