| Reviews for A Brick Wall |
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Yumenori 6/30/05 . chapter 1That was really cute! I liked the little angel and devil on Roy's shoulders and how they talked to him, especially the devil. All your stories have really good fluff and plot to it! I also love how you added the rest of the military to the story but not in a major way which is good. Ed is funny D |
Han Ji Eun 6/30/05 . chapter 1Oh my goodness, that was good. I also love another Royai of yours("Walk on Fire"). Excellent job and very well written! |
Cutie Blossom 6/23/05 . chapter 1Aw! *giggle* That's so sweet! Really though, this is one of the longest Roy and Riza fics I've seen. T_T Most of them are about page in length. Thanks for the long story! Hope you write more of this in the future! |
guest 6/15/05 . chapter 1 wow! this is really good! |
Jumetosa 6/15/05 . chapter 1 That was a great fanfic! |
A Different Life 6/10/05 . chapter 1cute! |
Rue 4/15/05 . chapter 1 Oh wow. I love this story, really. I like how you kept the characters the way they are. (Well, there was a little OOC, like with Hawkeye as someone said, but that's okay! :D) Oh, and it was really quite funny too! I loved the scenes with Ed. (With the stool... and the doors... and getting burnt... and the mention of Winry... *snickers*) Wonderful story! When I finally register for an account, I'll be sure to stick it in my favorites! |
Phyco girl 4/8/05 . chapter 1This is a great story! You portryaed the characters wonderfully. 5 stars _ |
brinabean 4/4/05 . chapter 1That was so sweet, I loved it! |
Zamnandi 3/25/05 . chapter 1*cues clapping the volume of an operahouse at full capacity* Bravo! This is one of the first RoyRiza fics I've actually seen that keep her totally in character. Most go at least a little OOC, because of the fact that she is, well, herself. Great job. :D *Turns up volume knob on the applause* |
Kitti3g0Me0w 3/15/05 . chapter 1This was a great fanfic, very well written. Can't wait to check out your other stuff! . |
no longer here folks 3/15/05 . chapter 1lalalalalaa that was so good... i feel light headed! |
cyanide dragon 3/11/05 . chapter 1That was so great! And I love everything you write, especially the royriza and shikaino. So great! The emotions were captured so well, no ridiculous OOC, just right. Just beautiful! |
jade's shadow 3/9/05 . chapter 1 woohoo! rock on! LOVE IT! your stories are great! and i love the roy/riza pairs, and the winry/ed pairs too! _ keep writing. i'll keep reading! |
Inferno-Hero 3/9/05 . chapter 1Nice story...again. I need to start writing here again. My big big story I've been planning on writing, with at least a thousand or two words per chapter hasn't been updated since June. X.X Baseball and basketball take all my time up now -.-; But it doesn't matter, pretty soon springbreak will be here and a break from baseball for a week. Not like I'll get to update or anything, that'll probably have to wait ;.; Eh oh well can't wait for your next one |