An overall good story. Watch spelling, grammar, puntuation etc.

hehe so cute, i liked it. you should do a sequal. make duncan take violet out dancing. he would be like. "you said the next time you danced i could dance with you." that would be so cute. any who later
Shayna15

interesting but good

Yah that was good. you should make chap. 2 and a 3 and a 4 and a 5.

Well done except for a coupla typos. Keep at it!

Sweet!

But short...:(

Please update soon! I liked it but i want to know what happens.

~liamaikenzgrl

CTS! Great story! I wish I chould make a story...

YAY! I still appreciate Under My Smile better. You must hate me now...

Wow your a really great writer. you should write a chapter 2 to the story the little window.

Oh, that was so cute! Even though I'm a true Violet and Quigley shipper, I still liked it.

I'm a reviewer! Kay, that was good. I don't really have much to say in reviews so I just say, that was good like I just did. Anyways,... never mind.