Blink blink. Very interesting notion there. It's hard to believe that was in front of everyone's eyes all the time, and I've probably never read a fic that touched on the subject before this. ;;
Bonus props for shoujo-ai-ness and the two most intimidating girls in Naruto... For critique I'll offer that moving from exchanges of histories to snogging is more than a little quick. Though- both of them are so forward that it might actually be accurate. The short length makes it difficult to grasp anything but the general idea of their similarities, while there's still a world to explore. I'd be more than interested to read a longer fic about this pairing...
Yay for shoujo ai, theres not enough of it. stupid untolerance... Anywhoo, I liked this story. Taws IC, and I liked the layout. Very nice. And I've never seen this pairing before.