Oh. I don't know why but I find this: "I just wanted to see you, and I’ve seen you, so I'll be leaving now." VERY SWEET!

Sirius...sweet:-)

I'm taking a break from HBP and thought I'd catch up on some fanfic.

Love this one-shot! I love the "don't you dare" line being said by both of them and, the scene where Sirius tries to talk to commiserate with him in his own way but ends up saying there's no such thing as kissing a problem and making it go away was very endearing and worked extremely well. And, as always, I'm glad to see Remus to get up the gumption to go see her. Great work! :)

I enjoyed how Sirius tweaked Remus, especially what "losers" their general descriptions would make them. Lovely touch with Remus getting the gumption to find Tonks.

I want to be your beta because i think you have a natural talent for writing, that just needs a little polish to show through in english. Habla espanol? Yo estudio espanol en la univerdidad, pero estoy la mas poer in la clase.

It was fun to read it. I like it very much. Perhaps a chapter 2 is need it so we know what happens between Remus and Tonks.
Keep the good work!

I like it, but you do need a beta. I'll do it if you want me to. It's not really that bad. All you have wrong is a few words out of place, some misspelled words (which EVERYONE has), and you're missing quotation marks, which makes it harder to read and takes away from how good the story is. Email me at padfoot1016@ if you'd like me to beta (I LOVE editing things. Don't know why. I guess I'm just weird). I really like this story though. You should write more Remus/Tonks stories. I really like how they both interacted with Sirius. Keep up the great work!
~Alicia