Cool poem. Captured the dark nature of the Ring, and Frodo's resolution. He's my fave LOTR character! I write a lot of poems too and I think yours are good, too. Email me, please? Thanks for reading my one and only fic.

o, deep. but good.

but where's virginia?

O! good job! you had the beginning be dark and bleak, and at the end you put in a brilliant ray of light! That's the sort of thing I like in a poem! Keep it up!