Reviews for Journal of a Bishonen Trainer

Reviews For: Journal of a Bishonen Trainer

Murder-chan 2007-12-29 ch 1,	abuseNice.
SSJ Heero 2005-06-11 ch 1,	abuseHmm... Self-insertion... Hopefully, this'll turn out well. From the prologue, I'm not really excited with the fic. Nothing has happened at all, and some action should be the thing that sparks people's interest. I hope the next chapter will come soon so I can see what happens. The style is not something I like much. It's sorta like a journal, but sorta not. At least we won't get two chapters about him clicking on an email and orientation, like a lot of other fics. By the by, I think Ocelot is referring to my story, G.
Ryushi Nigami 2005-04-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseYo. It's another Bishie World story. ^_^ w00t! Anyways, I just called to tell you that I have 2 Bishie World stories up at my account of the same name as the name I'm using now. In both of them, the trainer is indeed a guy. Also, for the one with more chapters, I have a family of Half Bishie trainers that I am going to work into the story at some point...All of the trainer stats are on my profile if you need to see them for any references. Lately, though, My stories have been having these strange references to Megatokyo, not that it's a bad thing, but it's really strange...also, I've been having a craving for an Apple computer. It just seems like they can do more and are more reliable. Must be the other webcomic I read, Applegeeks. Meh. In any case, keep writing and have fun with it. ^_^ Can't really consider it a good story unless the author's heart is into it. Ja ne! ~Ryushi Nigami~
Chocolate Donut Bomb 2005-03-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseYay! Another bishie story! I love these! And the trainer is a guy too which makes this extra interesting ^_^ hehe, I like the way you write - it's nice and clear and spaced out (I get put off easily by sentences clumped together in big long paragraphs) so that's another star to your fic. Keep writing ^.^
Ryushi Nigami 2005-03-11 ch 1,	abuseSup. your story has been added to the CC2. congrats. Also, good touch with the originality there.
PeaceLoveOcelot 2005-03-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseI always enjoy reading new Bishie World fics and it's even more interesting to read one from a male point of view. I believe there was another Bishie story written by a guy on this site at one time, but I'm not sure if it's here any longer. I also like the journal entries serving as the chapters, that's something I've never seen before in these kinds of stories. Naruto seems to be gaining popularity with anime fans, and I'm curious as to which other shinobi John is going to catch. Looking forward to future chapters!
Spatial 2005-03-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseWell, welcome to the world of the Bishies! Or was it the other way around? Hm... anyway, welcome! Actually, there are two other guys that I know of who have male Trainers. Though one of them is a half-Bishie. Do you allow characters? Do you, do you, do you? Sorry. Anyway, if you do, great! But if you don't, oh well. "I wonder what'll happen, to me..." Erm, I don't think that the comma was necessary. But, back to the subject at hand, you're going to have to get out of the hotel sooner or later. Otherwise, you're going to be broke. I've been broke once in Bishie World (it's in another story by Anriko) and it's not a pretty experience. Just make sure you don't spend TOO much money. I've spent two thousand dollars just to buy a sword for Kenshin, one of my bishies. (Also anoter story.) If you want to read some other spinoffs of Songwind's story, you can try the C2 community. Yamashira runs it. Well, he changed his penname, so I don't exactly remember his penname now. But, good luck and don't get broke! Cheers, Spatial

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