Whoa... Harsh man... 0 I thought it was good!

Um...interesting...this went by WAY to fast though..but it was good

ewwwwwww! I can't even imagine heero/dorthy

DORTHY DIE

LONG HARIED EYEBROW B*TCH

Why do the authors say the work they write is bad when it is pretty good.

KEEP WRITING

Riley Dark Phoenix

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girl! that was great! Friends forever!

Not bad. Where you came up with the idea I have no idea. But can you clear some things up for me? Did he know that they had raped and beaten her. Or did Dorothy arage it? And How did they get a hold of Relena. You could continue this and explain one of the three points that I have mentioned or set the story in Hell. It is strange that I didn't hate this considering that I am mainly a HYxRP fan.

o crap! that was still cool though.

well.. i can't say this is crappy.. i think it's pretty good, considering that i AM a loyal 1x2 fan.. but hey, it doesn't mean i can't have other options.. right? with this good hxr fic.. well.. it's okay, but why did you kill heero? ;;

Nice. Please continue.

this was pretty good