I see it's been a long time since this was updated. I hope you haven't abandoned it, because it's an excellent story.

I'd offer constructive criticism, but there aren't really any obvious errors to criticize. I'm just hoping you'll update sometime soon.

Wow this is a really good fic! Love the plot, hope you update soon!

This is awesome. I can't believe how in depth you made this story go. Update soon please, I'm hooked.

Oi! What's a girl to do! There must be some catalyst that will make our characters realize they have to change the timeline - otherwise I'm not sure they should! hehe... Sorry I love happy endings and I hate bittersweet stuff. One thing that I never get is all these stories is why it is so imperative to restore timelines when the whole premise of the entire game is to change it! This really has nothing to do with your story - just a philisophical rant on my part.

In any case I really like Lucca's sister, Lucca! Sorry that she has to go. In any case keep writing as always. Really like your story and especially your premise for the whole thing. Keep it up!

A good story. It's surprising that more Chrono Trigger fanfic doesn't deal with paradox. (My story Xeno Trigger does, which is one reason I'm interested in yours.) Of course, the Chrono Trigger timeline is very durable - as one of my characters puts it, Crono and co. "were tearing around the Jurassic era killing everything that growled at them and taking influential people forward in time." Nothing ever went really wrong unless they directly made it, or unless the original timeline had become flatly impossible.

Of course, that's just the sort of thing fanfiction gets to ignore - or, in your case, slightly weaken. And you're portraying the paradox in a way that's complicated enough to be fun but not so complicated as to be confusing. (I assume that further complications are forthcoming, though...) I like the interactions you get to do, too - Frog with Aliza, Marle with Aliza, Lucca with her (three) parents. And of course, Lucca's sister is still down on the Porre continent, in a nice parallel to "The Queen Is Gone." We're going to have to meet her eventually.

Also, I notice you chose to deal with the Crono Dialogue Problem by keeping him off-screen at the End of Time. (I'm of the firm opinion that any fanfic writer who wants to give Crono dialogue is effectively replacing the main character with an OC, and had better be sure he's doing a very, *very* good job before inflicting it on the public.) It's an elegant solution, but I'd still like to see Crono react to this altered timeline. Any plans for that?

This world is so fun! Everything's so mixed up but its so very much Chrono Trigger! Question though? What's Lucca's name in this timeline? Doesn't make sense that she would look that much like her half sister. And I'm not sure that Leene would have known about their time-traveling escapades. They can't tell people or people would want to go back and change things! Not that such pesky details really matter at all 'cause as you say time paradoxes don't have to make sense. I can't wait to find out what happens next so keep writing!

I tried reviewing this earlier, but wasn't cooperating, so I apologize if you end up getting this three times.

Anyway, good chapter, nice characterization, and I liked the internal conflicts about destroying the timestream.

(And thanks for mentioning me! I feel special now.)

I hope you haven't stopped working on this story, which would be a pity; I really enjoyed your characterization of Frog.

Wow, this fic is hurting my head @_@

Very interesting plot you've got going here, and I'm really intrigued to see how it all works out... you've also got me on tenterhooks wondering what's going to happen when Crono shows up!

(And where's Magus in this continuity? Just chilling out at the End of Time and going unmentioned, or did the crew kill him? Inquiring fangirls want to know.)

Man, the Lucca visits her house part was strange. How come Taban doesn't recognize Lucca as his daughter he had with Sheska? And does the daughter he had with Lara have a different name?

Wow, I'm surprised that more people didn't like this story. Honestly, this is the kind of thing that makes writing about time travel fun and who better to involve in temporal paradoxes than the CT crew? I think this fic is great (I liked that you ever so subtly kept Crono from talking in his little cameo; btw, his name DOES NOT have an "h") and I hope that you continue it, because I'm really interested in how all these inconsistencies will get resolved. See you later.

What can I say, I'm really impressed with your writing style.

The whole writing the letter to the future is a great idea, reminds me of a book I read somewhere, "Good Omens", I think.

Anyways, really, really want to see how it all turns out.

I really love this story, its been a while since I last played Crono Trigger but reading this makes me want to play it again.

Please update soon.

Oh sweet, another update. Hm... I think I might need to do one of those sometime soon.

This is amazing, I never thought about the subtle differences in the timelines, but this makes a lot of sense.

I wonder what changes can be made from OTHER sidequests as well!

I noticed a typo. Near the beginning of this chapter 610 AD is referred to as 910. Not that I don't like this fic.