Reviews for Utter Doom, or Something Like it

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Ganheim 2008-05-29 ch 1,	abuse“Shut UP!” [I think there's something wrong with the formatting. All of the dialog indicators seem to be missing.] he thought he could make out a vaguely familular scent... [Spelling: familiar] source of the vaguely-familular scent. [Spelling: familiar] You're demons, aren't you?” “I'm not,” Rin supplied helpfully. [Points: +1] “Mom, some youkai are abducting me.” “Okay, dear, be home before dinner.” [Points: +1] Sesshoumaru made a noise of contempt in the back of his throat. [How is that 'impossible'? I did that all the time behind my sergeants' backs.] “OSUWARI!” [I suppose it wouldn't do any good for me to say this is unnecessary Japanese, would it?] Anybody could live a short, pointless life if they really wanted to. [Points: +1] “Is he - ah, you know - all there?” “No,” Rin said pleasantly. “He's missing an arm.” [Points: +2] That was a funny crackfic.
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YOU NO 2008-03-26 ch 1, anon.	abusewhat the were you thinking when you wrote this . Pleas! Pleas! Pleas! Dont write any mor for the love of God! Y'ALL MOTHER CANT WRITE FOR
AshAttack 2008-02-29 ch 1,	abuseAbsolutely adorable. I loved it.
LatinAnimePrincess 2007-09-06 ch 1,	abuseThat was hillarious!! Good job!
bitter green tea 2007-08-03 ch 1,	abuseHat's off to you for this wonderful parody. This line got me cracking up though: Kokichi shot a quick glance toward the inu youkai. “Is he - ah, you know - all there?” “No,” Rin said pleasantly. “He’s missing an arm.” XDD Best. Line. Ever. I love your writing; you just have a way with words that make this fic funny. Thanks for the good read!
katie33h 2007-06-26 ch 1,	abusefunny funny funny poor fluffy ... life sucks
narnianqueen33 2007-05-19 ch 1,	abuseLOL! =D
Fia 2007-05-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseFluffy? Hyperventilating? Weird... I LOVE this story! I love these parts most! - Jaken discovered an unsettling thing about his lord that afternoon. Sesshoumaru, who was generally made less noise than the grave, wouldn’t shut up if someone asked him about war. - Miroku, Sango, and Shippou kicked at the ground idly, aware of their utterly pointless existences. - "Now, fight me!" - After a few hours of ranting, Kokichi was sorry he asked. - Sesshoumaru’s heel promptly stomped down on Jaken’s forehead. Never mind how far away they were standing, he still managed to boot Jaken whenever and wherever the situation called for it. - “Silence! If Sesshoumaru-sama says you’re his father, then you’re his father!” - Sesshoumaru decided it would have to be considered a kindness if he killed every human on the planet just to spare them the agony of being so piteously, piteously stupid. - “A village?” Rin asked, bemused. She squinted up at him. “Sesshoumaru-sama, why did we come here?” “Stupid girl! Clearly, Sesshoumaru-sama’s reasons are too sophisticated for you to comprehend-” “You don’t know, either-” “How DARE you! I’ll have you know-” - “Shut UP!” Rin and Jaken both jumped, staring at him funny, but he ignored them. Tenseiga pulsed angrily, as if to say “I am not shutting up, God dammit, not until you do what I tell you to!” - FUNNY!
BijouxNoirs 2007-04-09 ch 1,	abuseKokichi shot a quick glance toward the inu youkai. “Is he - ah, you know - all there?” “No,” Rin said pleasantly. “He’s missing an arm.” -That made me laugh out loud... brilliant
fluffy-fuzzy-ears 2007-04-09 ch 1,	abuseLMFAO Holy crap, you write the best satire!! Sesshoumaru is SO FUNNY hah. And wow, that's exactly what Inuyasha's group is.. like Scooby-Doo or something, geezuz.
clusterlizard1 2007-03-31 ch 1, anon.	abusedamn that was funny! specially the part where he's like "is he all there?, and rin said "no, he's missing an arm" so fukin funny! ('scuse the french).
piwqefjk 2007-03-22 ch 1,	abuseThat's great grins
yllom21 2007-02-18 ch 1,	abuseInteresting story and very amusing. Poor Sesshy. Hee, very, very funny.
Negotiatrix 2007-01-28 ch 1,	abuse"Kokichi was more than a little unsettled to find the sanest person there was a fixated, hero-worshiping, pyromaniac frog." That is possibly the great character description ever written. Great fic, I was laughing the whole way through!

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