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| David Fishwick 2008-03-28 ch 11, | abuseI liked your story so thanks and any chance of a sequel? |
| goldenshadows 2005-03-09 ch 11, | abuseI liked your story |
| Rory4 2005-03-08 ch 11, | abuseHello. I really like your story, great writing. I've enjoyed it very much so far, wonderful job. Just a bit of advice, though. If you want to allow more people to review, you may want to allow anonymous reviews. A lot of people that have no name on this site, read stories and want to review. And, plus, it's more beneficial to your writing in the long run. Anyway, great work! Keep it up! :-) Rory |
| Indigo Spirit 2005-03-07 ch 11, | abuseThis is going alot beter then I thought that it would Very nice. |
| Indigo Spirit 2005-03-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is rather cool. A bit of a Mary Sue but still pretty nice though. |