haha I love those little poems that come upon you at the most random times. They never quite rhyme, but are just so perfect in their own way. ABC's is a good one :D

HAHAHAHA! *laughs hysterically*

this was so good and hilarious!

thats very cool

this is really awesome!

the rhyming is actually quite good. i liked the part about the zebra :D. sorry you got detention.

LOL how cute. I was re-reading Welcome to Rivendale (Yea, I know I need to get a life) and thought gee, I wonder what else they have written. So here I be. Good job.

This is very original. Very good occupation for when you are in church indeed! Hope you didn't get too much detention. x

very good

Hee-hee-hee. That was great. SOrry about the detention! You are a great writer and you'e Welcome to Rivendell story I like a lot but I can't make myself devote my mind to 17 chapter stories much less 44! Sorry.

REALLY funny, on my favs. list! I wouldn't have been able to do that!

Tina101

That is so sweet. Although you all should've been paying attention.

ROFLMAO! I loved this!

that was...really interesting! fairly good rhyming and imaginative subject, with well matched sentences! Good job! ;)

This was really funny and rather cute. And I NEVER call things cute. You got that vile word out of me. You should consider youselves duly honored. :)

Fair Winds and Writing,

Princess of Ithilien

this is the funniest thing i've read in a while! and don't worry, my ryming (and spelling) is bad too.

QI