 TheDonutMistress 2005-07-20 . chapter 1Enough. That's what this fic was. Very much enjoyed. :) |
 fyre byrd 2005-06-03 . chapter 1What I like about this is that it justifies the way Rude has of speaking, (or not speaking) which I found when playing the game was fairly silly. Those idiocyncracies which the game designers like to give to characters in their speech often come off as more ridiculous than realistic. Here, however, Rude's way of talking begins to make sense. Rude has a very precise and logical mind. The shortness of the piece obviously adds to that effect as well. |
 wonwingangel 2005-05-18 . chapter 1Speechless. |
 Cueball 2005-03-24 . chapter 1I have to agree with the others, it's a cool story, keep up the good work. |
 the Red Nothing 2005-03-15 . chapter 1Wow. Very nice. I love Rude's definition of "enough." Very, very nice. |
 Sabriel41 2005-03-09 . chapter 1Wow. Rude doesn't get nearly enough love, and the way you write him is, as he might have put it, 'enough.' Perfect. Neither too little nor too much. I love how he's puzzled by Elena, and yet how he doesn't go out of his way to solve her...
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Very impressive work, Jester - keep it up, and Cheers...
~Sabriel. |
 ruderevived 2005-03-08 . chapter 1great writing i want you to join my C2 called Phoenix Down it is just for final fantasy fics and it has the 7th biggest staff on the general C2 list |
 AshCarroll aka ShadowDiva 2005-03-08 . chapter 1I loved it. Rude's five words or less rule fits very well with his character, and the words he chose for the others fit perfectly with their character. And being that Rude/Elena is my big FF7 'ship, I especially liked the end. Good work! :) |
 TruebornChaos 2005-03-08 . chapter 1Aw. Sweet. |
 Verdot 2005-03-07 . chapter 1This is gorgeous. Such a lovely little introspection...
I envy your ability to say so much with so few words.
~Cendrillo |