I just love this story...you write beautifully.

I don't know why I haven't read this story before, but it made me squee so loud. I'm just wearing a huge grin right now.

How i missed this gem, I dont know. Absolutely brilliant.

What about a marriage? Please want more of this story!

luv it cant critize i makes me think and in ny present condition thats not good

Such a wonderfully tender story - definitely one to file under "read again". They were both painfully in character, and I see Grissom's dream in much the same way you wrote it.

Why, indeed, are they still apart, denying themselves (and more importantly, US) the pleasure? *sigh*. At least we've got your lovely stories to show us how it *could* be.

Don't ever stop!

Lovely. V. sweet. tender is the word.

*Wonderful*. Warm, sweet, tender, *real*... just fantastic! I love how careful they are with each other - I love the 'hushed' tone you've created in this - I can almost feel the silence of that motel room. Fantastic. Fantastic!

I absolutely adore this story. I really love seeing Sara take care of Grissom. Thanks.

Great story!

Well-written, good characterisation and sweet without being too sugary. The ending felt maybe a little too neat given all their past history, but in the context of the story, it does work pretty well.

Excellent! Of course, from you I would expect no less :) Another superb GSR fic!

I loved that. This fic made me smile. Aw. Great work.

Yet another wonderful story. Loved Sara checking the sheets, so very true to to her character. I always love a sick, feverish Grissom.

Who knew food poisoning could be so sexy! I really enjoyed the story, and had to laugh when Sara started checking the sheets with the ALS. I was waiting for her to break out her supply of nonoxinol nine :-)