Well, I had fun with this one. Thanks for sharing. Perhaps one day soon your muse will do some rethinking. Take care, hon.

Aww. I loved it. It was the first crossover I have read between shows. The merging was quite smooth.

well cant wait to read it when you write it good luck

wow, this is the best crossover Ive ever read. the translation between series not only worked but was perfect was perfect. using the cloned jack was a good idea, though it would have been nice to kind of explane how cloned jack came to be. i was lucky enough to have seen the episode with him. If you do make another Eva/Stargate story, i hope you use the same translation story and Jack Jr.. i would also like it if you simply continued this story, anyway, great story, ill be sher to check out you other stuff.

NO!

Like a Darth Vader finding out that Padme was dead NO!

Say it aint so man.

look, I just ask that every now and then u try to come up with the plot. try and see how you would like the series to end. maybe that will help you out.

NO!

Why! Why! Oh the humanity of it all!

Oh..., ok I understand, and I will try and get over this. This was a really good story, the second best cross over with Eva that I read with another author writing an Eva/FMA story. You realy caught the personality's of the characters, as a huge stargate fan I was pleased with the way you portrayed everyone.

I really hope that you come back to this on day.

You are going to write another story right?

This isn't the end of Talon is it?

This is a weird fic, but exciting all together. I wouldn't mind knowing the pairings, if you have any?

Kepp up the good work, hope to read more soon?

A very wierd yet intriguing crossover that I hope to see more of.

you do realize it has been a while, a long while, a very very long while since you wrote anything for this story?

Man! I am loving this story so far. An update would be nice though. Don't make me beg cause I will. You just wait-I WILL BEG! Oh wait...I'm NOT supposed to beg am I? ... ... ... ...

Screw it! Seriously though, this rocks too hard to not be continued. Good Luck!

Peace

-J

BTW: You're one of my favorites *confetti*

i would put the conversation between Tilc (i think i spelled that right) and Rei in the next chapter, good over all though

Whens Unit-03 showing up, I mean if UNIT-04 is there already...?

Hmm, I wish to see a continuation of Understanding, in which the Ayanami throw off the oppression of the False God Gendo Ikari.

Dude, this is freakin' HILARIOUS!

Like fellow reviewer Isamu, I wasn't sure what to make of this from the title alone. I've only seen a little of the show "Stargate: SG1", and though I like it and the movie that inspired it, I wasn't sure how well it could mesh with the characters and plot of Evangelion.

Of course, I forgot about your inclinations towards parody.

From the very start, this story has been a wonderful sideline into the more comical sides of these two sci-fi masterpieces. From the Goa'uld Baal mimicing Dr. Evil, to the constant banter between Jack O'Neil and Daniel Jackson, the strife between Asuka and Jack Jr., Shinji and Daniel's shared "Mega-Playboy" powers, and your quick dispatch of Kaji just to give Asuka a reason to glomp on someone else. Brilliance, sheer brillance!

And don't get me started on your omakes ("Indeed?" "Indeed." ROTFL!). I sincerely hope you continue this wonderfully amusing fic. Think about it-can you imagine what a conversation between Jack Jr. and Rei would be like if they find out about their shared clonehood?

Jack Jr: Wow! So you're a partial clone of Shinji's mom, huh? Good thing you don't have to put up with the memories of your past life, like me. I mean, it'd probably make gettin' the freak on with your own son a little awkward.

Rei: . . . . .

Please forgive me, Talon-sama, for ever doubting in your omnipotent writing abilities. Thank you for yet another piece of literary greatness to which I may worship. *kowtows to his computer screen*

-Mares Guyver