 Katana2 7/26/01 . chapter 1Very moving and very well written. Beautiful. |
 Brynn McK 3/17/01 . chapter 1Nice work! You've got a smooth, sophisticated style and great descriptions. I enjoyed it! |
 Gurgosh 3/17/01 . chapter 1 awwwwwwwwwweee! that was sweet... im glad to see more stories about max's siblings... keep up the good work! |
 Frek 3/16/01 . chapter 1awwww, that was so sweet! |
 Anna McLain 3/16/01 . chapter 1 Excellent, sweet and concise. Great job! |
 Rona 3/16/01 . chapter 1 This is a wonderful fic of Jace. Very poetic and beautiful, just like a painting but in words. Thanks for writing it, hope to read more from you in the future. |