Nice!

glad to see you updated

Interesting addition, i'm curious to see how your story unfolds! Please keep writing :)

It's good to read a new chapter!
But what is it with this concept -Toreador are brainless mannequins?

glad to see the update

good stuff, hope its updated soon

Sorry I haven't been around -- just wanted to say I enjoyed the chapter, and I'm still reading as time permits.

Interesting update. Please keep writing! :)

Interesting developement. Please keep writing! :)

This is a great story. Very dark, like a vampire story should be, and well told.

Eek -- Salona might be about to give new meaning to the term "midnight snack".

All I can say is you betyter not kill Salona this time.

That was a great action sequence, really well done. plus, any story that includes a quote by Isaac Asimov has to be good.

Till now J., while being able on his own, appeared to rely mostly on his allies, ghouls, links..and the knowledge of his enemy weaknesses. And now you leave him without all of this.
Combined with the title this sounds a phoenix-metaphor..except that kindred and fire really don't go along.:(

Your storytelling seems to go from dark to darker, from fast- to faster-paced, from somewhat-hopeless to a dark pit.
And toward a more refined style.

Now, if you could just update more..

I love this story. I have nothing helpful to say, but please finsh "From the Ashes of the Old World". You are one of the best writers I've ever read.