What a touching fanfiction... Falco will always care for his best buddies...

Amazing... so touching and deep...

WOW! That was so cool^^ Nice work green hat, oh and I just loved that part 'or get blown to little tiny pieces' XD

O.o WOW! I've played enough lylat wars to know whats goin on ^^ im glad i read it cause i liked it

What a powerful, raw personal account this was... I have always thought of Falco as an enigmatic character with a well-hidden but turbulent past, and you captured that with great pathos and style. Excellent, although I'm still wondering where it falls into the timeline - before the first game?

Incredible.

I am astounded by the way of writings some people are capable of.

And this is one of them.