I have to say that I really hope you continue this story. I've just read it, and I can't stop crying.

This was asmome. It made me cry really hard. My onnly complaint was the whole Karen and Grace thing seemed realy random and out of place.

Oh my God, I love, I love, I love! You're an amazing writer. At first I was afraid that it would be too dark and depressing for me, but with the right mix of good memory flashbacks it was more than enjoyable. I especially love chapter three, with the almost sex scene (it was really hot, I felt very naughty just reading it; and that's coming from someone that read gay erotic novels on a regular basis); and the Karen visit (you seriously had me crying, and no fanfiction has ever been able to do that to me before). I really love it, definatly a favorite, keep writing.

omg! only your stories can make me actually cry! its ridiculous! i was actually sobbing...irrate breathing and all...i still have tears running down my cheeks

This is so good, I wish you didn't stop writing this. It's so...perfect. -Sigh- wonderful writing

Hey i like it and its a good idea but i think you need to write will more like himself. I think he's being to brutal. i think he's more sensitive even though hes in such pain. i do like it so far though

aw. Gets me every time! The order of events, the happy times, the angst...such a great combo all rolled into one. Poor Will! My God! please keep goin hun :)

Wow. That's pretty heavy dude. its still really sad...Poor Karen and Will :(. You KNOW that I am a fan of your writing style ... keep it up buddy!

aww..At least Will's being nice to Jack in your story. I hate it when that lawyer's always insulting my Jack.. Hehe. :) Please update.

I know i have reviewed this on another site, but I will review it once again here. its so sad, but I love how Will still talks to Jack - i think that is awesome - and especially Jacks quip about 'reality tv'. really good - keep writing!

whoa... this is purely deep and awesome... i'm so glad for once there is an angst centered around will. please continue...