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SpeedingCars8 8/22/06 . chapter 23
jeez well that was a happynothappy ending weirdness lol

funny she forgot her birthday. who does that? lol

i know she had a lot goin on tho...clearly lol

woo chris is back hm... o.O now all i have to do is read the other 2 friggin stories! hah...maybe i'll print your oneshot and read it since i'm being kicked off the comp

idk why you ever told me not to read this one. this is only ur first story and its not even bad at all. idk what ur talking about lol...i liked it a lot..its like a hundred times better than my first one. i'm not even done with my first one. technically. idk. i didn't want to make a trilogy but i left some things open-ended. i need suggestions lol. i'm afraid to ask you czu then it'll ruin it if ur planning on read it. oh well. ttyl! good story!
SpeedingCars8 8/22/06 . chapter 22
see? i knew you'd get so much better with this suspense thing! its still very good

“Hey Em, do you want to stay here tonight? I just need something to take my mind off of Chris and this DNA crap.”

that made me chuckle, idk why lol

"take my mind off of this important life altering CRAP." lol

stupid chris. i'm mad at him. I'm going to avoid him and not speak to him anymore...lol

wth. idk. bye lol one more!
SpeedingCars8 8/22/06 . chapter 21
o hm what happens next? well i'll keep reading..only a couple left anyway.

i wonder if the baby's nose was as big as paige's lmao jk

yeah SECRETS DO SUCK! (when they're hidden from best friends o.O jk lol)
SpeedingCars8 8/22/06 . chapter 20
aw sweet, i'm glad things went alright...

this was the funniest line:“My water just broke,” she said calmly.

“That’s great Manny, but I’m tired.” He rolled over and closed his eyes.

That'd so be mike's reaction when he's sleeping haha

i actually like the name Lily Adila...

hey about the giving birth in water thing..i'd be scared my baby would drown...BUT...

technically babies diffuse oxygen from inside the stomach of their mother...so they'd have to do the same when going into the water, before they are in air and can take their first breath. so when they're in the water, they could technically be considered part of the fish species...lmao...sry idk what i'm talking about hehehehe
SpeedingCars8 8/22/06 . chapter 19
ok i hated chris at the beginning of this but i like him again now

you have no idea how hard i laughed when i read that thing about online baby names. reminds me of library times when we thought i was pregnant with mike's starwars baby. Anakin lmao...mark or somethin..oh yeah, mark alexander hahaha...i love it.
SpeedingCars8 8/22/06 . chapter 18
oh yay twins. i like girl and boy twins better than 2 of either sex. idk, it's just better lol no offense to chan and quin, like them anyway lol...aw man i'm being kicked off at 1030...so i hope i rnr the rest of these before tomorrow! my parents won't let me back on the computer tonite so i'll be on tomorrow morning before i go out maybe. story's goin good!
SpeedingCars8 8/22/06 . chapter 17
i'm mad at mr. raddick lmao whatever his friggin name is. he saw that craig was right there, he should have acted on it. he's stupid. lol craig needs to be arrested.

and i'm going to be mad if in your other 2 parts of this trilogy, mr. o gets out of jail or something and goes after people. eek.

I think thats mean that hazel isn't friends with paige just cuz she didn't tell her she was pregnant yet. that's mean. some people are so scared they can't tell anyone at all.
SpeedingCars8 8/22/06 . chapter 16
oh i friggin knew you'd do that at the end...i predicted it at the beginning of the court thing lol

really well written chapter. i'm glad you wrote out everything that happened in court. it made it more interesting. i was too lazy to do that for ryan's murder case in my story. plus i just wanted the ending reaction. but neway, good chapter. i only have a few left! i hope i finish before i have to get off the computer! XD
SpeedingCars8 8/22/06 . chapter 15
lol what if no one had reviewed? you woulda still posted the next chapters lol..i did that too in my authors notes...

glad they got arrested.

i'm surprised that you made it so emma believe manny was raped...i figured she'd not believe it at first since craig was her boyfriend before that and stuff...
SpeedingCars8 8/22/06 . chapter 14
well idk anything about jack so ...nope. lol aw i like that song. i never really listened to selena until you played that song a while ago when i slept over your house.

i like emma a teenie bit more simply because she temporarily saved her stupid ass by breaking up wtih him. but i'm guessing that since you're writing this, it'll get worse and he'll do something about his anger...lol.
SpeedingCars8 8/22/06 . chapter 13
at first i thought the thing at the end was a poem you wrote. i was going to say its very good lol oh well. i feel so bad for manny. that's how i would react if i found out that i was. i'd cry but i wouldn't tell people right away. i'd like be in shock but i'd have the baby most likely unless there was something medically wrong. cuz i can't imagine having an abortion. its just as painful as labor...and at least when you go through labor, you get a baby out of it. like something good comes out of it. with an abortion you just like get...blood. it's gross. ok enough blabbing, more chapters! lol
SpeedingCars8 8/22/06 . chapter 12
lol that little kid was so cute...reminded me of the twins when they're all afraid after they pee themselves. never mind farting and pooping by accident haha. chan is great. neway...yeah...i figured she had to still be pregnant. but when you said she wasn't...i was thinking maybe she was actually sick from being raped. cuz that happens. cuz it screws up your immune system. i'm afraid to read the next chapter because since craig won't get sex from emma he'll probably rape her. eek. ok time to read more!
SpeedingCars8 8/22/06 . chapter 11
damn you and your good suspense haha...well the thing that my spinoff woulda been was sort of taken a little lol well not taken but...lol not possible now ...i woulda had them both get pregnant with a twist at the end where they were both raped by Mr. O. o O.O! yeah but knowing me i'd make it AU ...a universe where rape is a capital crime that deserves the death penalty (i think it does sorta lol) so that he can have a public hanging lmao HAHAHAHAHA. ok i'm done. off to read the next chapter.

btw, i like chris in this story. emma is pissing me off for no reason tho lol.
SpeedingCars8 8/22/06 . chapter 10
i'm reviewing! lol...yeah didnt you say that this chapter isn't very realistic? or were you talking about the next major event. i'm assuming you were...aw i like JT in this story ...i hope she tells him or something. I so would do a spinoff of this story but i never really considered doing degrassi. well it'd only be a spinoff of the chapter. sort of an alternate ending type of thing. lol but i won't steal it, don't worry. Damn, manny should be like Trey "I HAD SEX WITH VOLCHOK!" only it'd be "I GOT RAPED BY TWO GUYS THAT SHARE HOLES!" lol...yeah.
SpeedingCars8 8/13/06 . chapter 9
lol i remember the puke bucket days

Do they get out early at Degrassi or something? wait...is this middle school or high school...i thought it was high school. oh wait...heh? i forget lol

oh yeah we got out at 210 lmao ah whatever

its funny that you put tyler hilton lyrics in here lol idk y i saw that comin'

I like chris in this more now lol he's the only good guy...besides JT...but he doesn't count hah

are those her adopting parents? i forget ...i think you've said somethign to me and it mighta been explain in chapter 1...hmm

no! but more suspense! lol ahh! i didn't print past this chapter so now i have to wait til after camping to read the rest. good story so far lol
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