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Danaa 1/16/08 . chapter 1
... muahahahahahahahaha XD

Teaming up on the big bro. Nice. _
Goddess of Idun 3/2/06 . chapter 1
LOL! Varför är den under genren 'general' och inte under 'humor'? (Som du kanske har listat ut vid det här laget, så har jag gjort en liten visit till din profil, där jag kollar upp allehanda ting...)
Tewi 2/11/06 . chapter 1
you are a tricky person! you'd think it'd be something all big but no it's just hair in the shower! hilarious! loved it!
The Sacred Heart 2 9/1/05 . chapter 1
I thought it was Donnie that everyone was talking about, but Splinter? Man, you sure fooled me! And the ending was SO random and a little funny. Well, good job and keep up the good work!

See ya!

The Sacred Heart 2
Ormspryde 4/12/05 . chapter 1
*lol* I bet Splinter goes through a hell of a lot of shampoo, right? That's what they get for living with a giant rat, I suppose. :P
Fallen Hikari 3/9/05 . chapter 1
LOL! What an interesting little yarn this one was! *snicker*

Don't forget to clean your hair out of the drain! *snorts in amusement*

Ah, poor Leo...always stuck with the tough duties. *wipes tears away from eyes*

Nicely put together.

Ja ne!

fallen hikari _
neosun7 3/9/05 . chapter 1
Great story! I loved their excuse to make Leo confront Splinter. My siblings are always making me do things because I'm the oldest. Again, great fic!
governmentcontractor 3/8/05 . chapter 1
That was hilarious. I nearly spit soda on my laptop. Great!
Chibi Rose Angel 3/8/05 . chapter 1
You and your comedy! First Mikey's one shot and now Leo's. Very good here. I couldn't help the smile or the chuckle that escaped from my mouth when I got to the end of the story. You had me going there for a while thinking that it was Donnie that they were mad at. I don't know, I guess for leaving the bathroom a mess or something. Speaking of which, where is good ol Donnie anyways? You've written about Leo, Mikey, and Raph but I don't suppose I missed Don's one shot did I? At any rate, don't feel bad about being a night owl. I happen to be one myself. And as for the Mikey one shot, thanks for your info. I have a few ideas swimming around in my head, I just have to sit down and actually write something. You may have given me a few more ideas to go on as well. Now you took the words right out of my mouth when you said you're putting out stories left and right. I thought the same thing but when inspiration hits, it hits hard doesn't it? Anyways, kudos and write more soon!
spootycup 3/8/05 . chapter 1
That was too cute.. i loved...
08032005 3/8/05 . chapter 1
The student who dobbed on the teacher. Hmm... that would be hard. No wonder none of the others wanted to do the job. You really know how to hold the suspense, you held my attention all the way up to the last line. I love these types of stories.
Reinbeauchaser 3/7/05 . chapter 1
Ya know, I had a WHOLE different ending with the way this was developing.

I have a husband.

I have a son.

Sometimes in the bathroom - well, their 'aim' is a bit off, know what I mean?

Enough said.

Anyway, LOL, this was quite funny just the same. Yeah, I can just imagine how much 'hair' there would be after Splinter was done with his shower. Better yet, can you just imagine how long he would take to dry, not to mention how he'd smell? Regardless of how many baths they take, rats smell; its in their fur and their dander. Can't be helped. I should know since I had four at one time. Neat little guys, believe me. I likened their 'odor' to sandlewood. Very interesting scent. Rather pleasant, unless their cage needed cleaning.

Anyway, nice job with this, Mickis - and I love your Swedish verson of killing two birds with one stone. Very cute and I rather perfer it.

Be blessed.
pacphys 3/7/05 . chapter 1
Indeed you have been spitting out stories like nobody's business. Your muses have certainly been putting in overtime lately. LOL

Two flies with one smack is a much nicer expression. My personal favorite non-english expression is Welsh. Basically it means raining cats and dogs (While I'm at it, what the heck is with that expression?) Anyway it translates to something like "raining like old ladies striking the ground with their canes."

LOL! Poor Leo, what does he have to say?

Hmm... either he's going to Splinter to tattle on Don, or Splinter did something in the bathroom that has Raph cheesed off. Ah, Splinter did something.

LOL! That's great. Poor Leo. Forced to confront Daddy on his bad habits! truly, truly funny. That would definitely be one benefit to being a reptile! hehe.

Cheers,

pacphys
kikiyophoenix19 3/7/05 . chapter 1
Another fine on-shot you put up there. It was pretty humorous too. So, now you are done with these little series, unless you get more insperation for the job. Nice
Sassyblondexoxo 3/7/05 . chapter 1
Mickis, Mickis, Mickis...

Of course I'm reading this! Do you think that I would let any of your little creations slip my attention? That would be a crime, LOL!

Wow...around 3:30 am I'm guessing? I think that you need to smack your muse upside the head and knock some sense into her! Either that, or send her on a plane and hope that the jet lag is bad enough to get her switched onto NORMAL time. But hey, I can't blame her for giving you all of these great story ideas - I've been loving them! You are honest to god one of the funniest writers out there.

Man goodness, how in the world did you think of this! I almost fell out of my chair (AGAIN!) I was giggling so hard. And you're right, I would have come after you with a big stick if you didn't finish it out with a Leo story (since Linchi finally updated today, I was looking for someone else to pound on! J/K)

At first I was thinking that Master Splinter had a problem with flushing the toilet...a very guy thing to do - GROSS! Who wants to see that? But then I got a suprise - hair in the shower! Which is equally gross. That is the BIGGEST thing that I've had to get used to sharing a bathroom with my husband. It drives me batty!

Anyway, thanks for another HILARIOUS story...I had to giggle at the little shout out to me at the biginning too - LOL, this is the last time that I'll give you shit about it!

All the love, SASS
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