They seemed a little out of character to me at the end but you know in both of your Ranma/Akane fanfics I seem to be relating this to another anime which might be why it seems aqward but so romantic

You are a really good writer You should make a chaptered story for your next Akane/Ranma story

marvelous story _

Wow that was breathtaking! That really is just too sweet! :)

very pretty story, very very pretty. I like taht it wasn't fast moving, nice and slow and real. Thanks for the read

Tiney

more detail

but good

This fic is sweet and so waffy. And I want ask your permission for translate this and Here to spanish, I would send a email, but since fanfiction take it from free information, this is the only way that I have for ask you. Let me know what you thik, there is my mail, I will tell you all that you want to know.

I loved it. I cried.

Great story!

I really enjoyed this story, as well as your other Ranma and Akane story. Are you planning on writing anythin else? You have a gift.

*_*

AWW! kawaii!

Aww, cute story! _

Aw, how beautiful! They are soo sweet... I've got tears in my eye! *sniff*

I love it. Great story. Absolutely beautiful...

How sweet and cute! Very well written too .*Maura*

awww...i LOVE YOUR WORK! _ I hope you get a chance to update the Inu storyh soooooon

I miss it... It was my FAVE...

I liked it!