Another interesting fic. I just love how Elena's like "Who are they? They eat babies for breakfast? Nah, no way." XD

I adore the title. This was great; I enjoyed the story. I like your version of Elena's initiation and the dropping of Sector 7's plate, and this whole idea of Reno going on vacation. Interesting. This one wasn't as great as "Sky," but good nonetheless.

I'm pretty sure I saw a silly typo there. In the fourteenth paragraph, I believe, the part in parentheses has "though" mispelled: "Even thought I was."

This one didn't flow as well as its predecessors. I, however, love the metaphor in the first paragraph, about the Shin-Ra building being the Mt. Olympus of reality. And the simile about the mythical castle. That was beautiful imagery!

-Ducky