|Reviews for Spoils of War|
| IntraSule 8/29/12 . chapter 1
Wow, I can sense this caring, intimate closeness betwee these two without they're having to be romance. Nice work.
| Cymoril Avalon 1/11/06 . chapter 1
I see Abby already found this fic. Unsurprising, given how she adores Rishid. Myself, I'm just pleased to see such an oft-ignored character given his due.
*cries* It's Malik, not Marik.
Poor Jou. What happened?
This definitely could be given a second chapter, or even more, delving into the background and explaining things. How did Jou lost his soul? How did Malik become Pharaoh?
...I like Malik as a Pharaoh.
Please continue this. It has so much potential!
| abby-sarajane 3/28/05 . chapter 1
Wow, this is quite good. :: nods:: I had no idea it was Jou until Rishid actually said his name. :: applauds::
| Dreadful Virtue 3/9/05 . chapter 1
...That ... thats just gread! Keep going!
| Misura 3/9/05 . chapter 1
An engaging and intrigueing 'missing scene' that I enjoyed to read very much. In part, of course, because it's about Rishid and he's being a somewhat good person in it. I loved the way you depicted his character in this piece. -
| Ankhutenshi 3/8/05 . chapter 1
This story, habitual of all your writing, is beautiful.
| lily22 3/8/05 . chapter 1
Hey, I remember this from KG! I still like it as much as I did then. Especially the "bright and lifeless as jewels".
| Tamara Raymond 3/8/05 . chapter 1
How beautiful! I love how delicate and yet how intense this AU piece is. You've created heart-wrenching emotions in a few simple lines.
Your style is...remarkable. Just exquisite. "As trusting as a flower"; "Stone blocks sealed the domicile into a crypt"; "Sorrowful eyes darkened to onyx"... I want to gather all of your words up and hug them! o_O Yes, I suspect I'm a little weird that way...
And you've really got Rishid's character showing through. (is a Rishid fan) His faith in Malik, despite the circumstances, was perfect. The last three chilling lines were all too telling of that. Wonderful job.
| Yami Ferret 3/8/05 . chapter 1
Woah. Taht is...scary.
| kaibahugger 3/8/05 . chapter 1
very veyr good
kudos and snaps congrats!
| Red Vixen 3/8/05 . chapter 1
I like it so far. Is it sort of a bout what would happen if marik had won? I think. I don't know. I liek it though keep going!
| Shella 3/8/05 . chapter 1
Damn. This is warped. Firstly, an interesting twist in having Marik win; second, a really cool choice of perspective. I mean ... dude. O.O Bloody cool. 0_o
| Yuki KIKI 3/7/05 . chapter 1
Neat. At first I thought it was Malik who had his soul taken away by Yami... Kind of short, but otherwise fairly well written.