Well that was certainly interesting.

I like it so far. Thanks for the credits, but theres already an Unknown on this place so I had to sign up as Unknown Factor. I might get into writing and make a story based on Unknown and the scarf(seperate from my RP Unknown)

Wow, this is a great job. You'd think it would be more confusing with as many characters as there are, but really, it's not. Great composition, grammar, and all that fun technical stuff, plus pretty catchy so far, for lack of a better term. I know my character will be popping up later, so I definitely can't wait to see the next chapter. Keep up the great work!