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| HuntingPeace 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseOMG! You have to update soon because I am assuming that that is Connor the demon is carrying. I really like your plot but your quotation marks are a bit off in the speech. Please update soon! |
| gopie 2006-04-01 ch 1, | abuseFunny, esp the cliche making out in cemetary part. I hope they don't accidently kill Lorne cause that's just bad. |
| angel-cordy 2005-03-08 ch 1, | abuseThat was cute. Please continue with the story and it was really good. |
| Indigo Spirit 2005-03-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is pretty cool.I hope ther ewill be more soon. Nice cliff hanger. |
| LoveAlways 2005-03-08 ch 1, | abusewhats happening? i need to know more or i may expolde! |