Oh, and you don't plan to update?

i know the chapter is named "the ending" but i hope it isn't the end! i want to read more. please update soon.

Yay! Great story! Great ending! I'm so happy they didn't die!

Can't wait for more. This is such a good story. Here's hoping for a happy ending. please...;)

Another good chapter, but I have to admit, there were some points that i had trouble following Michelle's train fo thought. Also, not to criticize, but I'm a grammer freak. Be careful when using 'new' and 'knew', you confused them in at least 2 places.

Otherwise, still a good story.

This is excellent. I love getting inside the assassin's head. His POV is so cold and dark. I love it!

Yay, you updated! I am dying to know how you are going to finish this, so please write the next chapter soon!

I always really like how you write Michelle. This was no exception :)

I'm certainly looking forward to TheBear chapter.

Oh this is good. I love the way you've brought out Michelle's guilt and frustration. Tony to save her again?

Update soon

awesome! i love this one so far, keep going iw ant to more :)

It's been too long since you've written a 24 story and it's great to have a new one from you. Cant wait for the updates

Wow. very very interesting. viper and bear were really well chosen animals. loved the bear in a trap part.

please continue soon!