|Reviews for The viper, the bear and the assassin|
| Dazzi 7/6/05 . chapter 4
Oh, and you don't plan to update?
| Joe's girl 7/4/05 . chapter 4
i know the chapter is named "the ending" but i hope it isn't the end! i want to read more. please update soon.
| bookworm03 7/4/05 . chapter 4
Yay! Great story! Great ending! I'm so happy they didn't die!
| Joe's girl 5/20/05 . chapter 3
Can't wait for more. This is such a good story. Here's hoping for a happy ending. please...;)
| Joe's girl 5/20/05 . chapter 2
Another good chapter, but I have to admit, there were some points that i had trouble following Michelle's train fo thought. Also, not to criticize, but I'm a grammer freak. Be careful when using 'new' and 'knew', you confused them in at least 2 places.
Otherwise, still a good story.
| Joe's girl 5/20/05 . chapter 1
This is excellent. I love getting inside the assassin's head. His POV is so cold and dark. I love it!
| kita 5/18/05 . chapter 3
Yay, you updated! I am dying to know how you are going to finish this, so please write the next chapter soon!
| kita 3/29/05 . chapter 2
I always really like how you write Michelle. This was no exception :)
I'm certainly looking forward to TheBear chapter.
| Bluenose 3/28/05 . chapter 2
Oh this is good. I love the way you've brought out Michelle's guilt and frustration. Tony to save her again?
| foxlight 3/28/05 . chapter 2
awesome! i love this one so far, keep going iw ant to more :)
| Bluenose 3/9/05 . chapter 1
It's been too long since you've written a 24 story and it's great to have a new one from you. Cant wait for the updates
| kita 3/9/05 . chapter 1
Wow. very very interesting. viper and bear were really well chosen animals. loved the bear in a trap part.
please continue soon!